What advantages or disadvantages do you think tourism has brought to the area?
Tourism is one of today's controversial issues in a country. They want to visit historical palaces, cultural centers, natural areas, and forests. There are some advantages and disadvantages to tourism.
First of all, tourism bring job and opportunity for local people. The people who traveled abroad usually interested in gaining more experience on their trip, so they may spend a lot of money to visit a museum, theater and to buy from the shopping center. It would be arising from the earning sources of local people.
However, tourism brings some disadvantages too. For example, when a lot of tourism interest in to see a specific natural area, it would be alarming for Eco friends. The trash throw to the environment and leave there are dangerous for earth. So global warming is more serious problem than before thought.
In my opinion, tourism can improve economic conditions, local services like hotels and restaurants, but they can make pollution and destroy the habitat of animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15243902439 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71622217045 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658536585366 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5935475971 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8181818182 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142260737149 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696721309642 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100841999016 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861769527547 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584432569682 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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