An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.

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An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor's record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition.

The ailing patient should not be given the access to the doctors record of treating similar patients to enable him to decide whether the doctor is competent. Allowing this medical record of other clients of the doctor is actually a breach of doctor-patient confidentiality. Most of the time the hospital or the clinic should decide to select the perfect doctor for any patient. Here is why it is very important.
The patient is not a medical expert. It's the task of the hospital management to assign the doctor based on the problem that is treated. Allowing the patient to see the other patients record treated by the doctor will only create confusion and many misconceptions. Sometimes a benign symptom can be a identifier of a particular disease based on the other factors of that particular patient, where the same symptoms is harmless in case of some other patient.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... The patient is not a medical expert. Its the task of the hospital management to ...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ions. Sometimes a benign symptom can be a identifier of a particular disease base...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 33.0505617978 18% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 58.6224719101 32% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 2235.4752809 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 148.0 442.535393258 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88513513514 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 4.55969084622 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8147305699 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 215.323595506 39% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560810810811 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 704.065955056 33% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.99004192 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.375 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.21951772744 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35808137255 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16296250252 0.0831039109588 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132982587309 0.0758088955206 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292799557014 0.150359130593 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995083155256 0.0667264976115 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 100.480337079 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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