All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.

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All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.

It is of no doubt that behind the all-round development of a child, both their parents and teachers have equal contributions. The issue whether parents should also volunteer their time to the schools is a matter of debate though.

Well, not all parents are sufficiently educated. Also it might happen that they are carrying out some physical laborious jobs and not in touch with books for a pretty long time. They can’t positively contribute to the process of teaching in schools. Also there may be situations where, even though they may be extremely knowledgeable, they might be doing a very tough or hectic job and not in a position to spare time for volunteering. They may be a busy doctor, a civil service officer of a country, or an officer of the armed forces. Also they might be staying in a different place altogether by virtue of their job. So it will be highly imprudent to think that such parents can also manage time to teach in schools.

But on the other hand, those parents, who are having some free time to spare and also have relevant experiences can be encouraged to volunteer to their children’s schools given that they are capable of understanding the child psychology properly. Such noble jobs are definitely not suitable for short-tempered parents. It is a hard truth that teachers are good at imparting bookish knowledge only. But working parents can make students understand the real world challenges faced by individuals outside academia. Such idea will definitely be helpful for shaping the future of students. An engineer parent can teach mechanics, physics, chemistry and mathematics courses to students may be once or twice a week. Some parents may be more brilliant than conventional teachers and can help students understand critical concepts easily. A historian can make learning history enjoyable in schools. Also schools may encourage eligible parents to address motivational talks in schools occasionally.

Let’s us look at it from a different perspective now. The idea of small classroom size each with less than 20 students is also being implemented now-a-days. So small classroom implies higher cost of infrastructure and more requirement of teachers. Now getting sufficiently qualified teacher is indeed a great challenge for the school administration. So some highly qualified parents can definitely contribute their knowledge in such scenarios. Also, parents can volunteer their time in the day-to-day running of the school administrating committee and place their valuable inputs for the both short and long term development of school.

So finally, schools should weigh out their needs and necessities and they may encourage certain eligible parents to contribute to education only after a careful scrutiny. Then only such a step can be very effective, else it will be a total chaos.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, so, then, well, no doubt, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 25.0 12.4196629213 201% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2398.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23580786026 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9770195901 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515283842795 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 727.2 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5605455807 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2307692308 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315072780241 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849478142478 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666544060525 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192892946512 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529623509967 0.0667264976115 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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