All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Today, people in the world live a fast pace life. Working for morning to night to earn money for their family. In many families both the parents do jobs for their family. In this busy schedule, they forget to pay enough attention to their children. The parents should volunteer their time to their children's school.
Firstly, children learn many things from the school. they learn basic subjects and ethics from the school. Their behaviour is also influenced by the enviornment provided by their school. many children often get spoiled by bad company. they start behaving immorally and perform some bad action. if the parents do not volunteer time for them and if the children are not reformed, they can adopt this type of behavior for whole life. therefore, it is parents job to stop them from perfoming immoral actions. For example, many people learn bulling in their childhood and when they are not reformed, they become passive to others feelings.
Secondly, school is a place where students learn basic subjects like mathematics. it is not only teachers responsibility to teach the students, but also parents responsibility to teach them or help their children with the subjects in which their children are weak. if the people would not devote their time for their children's school they will not learn about their children's weaknesses. The parents should take some time from their busy schedule and should try to learn about their children's problem and should guide their children. The teachers have many students; they can not focus on each and every child individually. therefore, people should try to understand this and should guide their children when needed.
Moreover, people should volunteer time for their children's school to support their children when they are taking part in some competition. people should provide their children moral support and should encourage them. this will bring best out of their children. they will be compete with enthusiasm. this will lead their children to victory. Even if the children loose, parents should provide them moral support and encourage them for next competition. this type of support will lead their children to success in future.
therefore, it is important that all parents should volunteer time for children's school so that they can guide their chidren when they needed and prevent them from choosing wrong path. they should also provide moral support when their children has failed in their objectives. this will lead their children to success in their future life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 12.4196629213 177% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 412.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20388349515 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38671603308 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402912621359 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0140878878 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9310344828 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2068965517 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13793103448 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 7.80617977528 307% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381377002379 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137523960603 0.0831039109588 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119714407558 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.280114633881 0.150359130593 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686879938573 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 48.8420337079 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 12.1743820225 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.7820224719 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.