All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
The statement states that all parents should volunteer time for to their children’s school. In my opinion, people should do volunteer work in general even if it was not for their children’s school. Volunteer work usually enhance the person’s character and improves his communication skills. In addition, to him being useful in his community by doing something that could make the environment around him better to live in for everyone.
Some people would disagree with this statement. Those people can be convinced that parents should invest their time in their work instead of wasting their time in volunteering. This perspective can be an advocate of parents investing their volunteer time in improving their and their son’s lifes in general. While in my opinion parents in fact should do volunteer work in their children’s school, in their spare time for many reasons.
First, parents volunteering in their children’s school can give the children a feeling of being secure by seeing those same faces that supply him with care in middle of his school day. Usually children will carry this feeling with them to their home and through their life, which will make them more calm, happy and even easier to raise. Many articles nowadays mentions that the child being happy and secure will reflect positively on his mind developing.
Second, parents being close to their children can improve the relationship between the two. As a kid you can be affected by anything you see and seeing your parents over and over even for a glance, will surely reflect positively on the relationship between you and them when you grow up to an adult. If a child built a lot of memories with his parents even by sight only, he will carry them with him when he grow and it will improve his relationship with the parents in a significant amount.
Volunteering in general can bring joy to families. In my opinion, parents volunteering close to their kids, will surely be rewarded with happiness in the time or later.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...ly, he will carry them with him when he grow and it will improve his relationship wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, in addition, in fact, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0296735905 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77490118841 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.451038575668 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1707889193 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.9375 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381169682306 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163839450278 0.0831039109588 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129311389787 0.0758088955206 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246409554222 0.150359130593 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937969438118 0.0667264976115 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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