All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
In the issue of "All the often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently.If the companies were spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary".I strongly believe that company should spend more time in communication with the employees so that they can operate the company more efficiently.
Some would argue that company should hire outside consultants to operate the company efficiently. On the other hand there are others who would state that the communication with the employees will improve the efficiency of the company. The reason behind their belief is that the more you communicate with the employees the more easy it will be for you to understand the employees side.Now consider an example of the google one of the most successful company in the world. the reason behind it's success is the relation between their employees and the owner of the company. the google follows the rule of the strong relation between the employees and owner as the foundation of the efficient and successful company. this helps google that what employees need to work efficiently so they can provide them that,
Like google, Microsoft is also a successful company as they communicate with their employees on regular basis. This helps them to understand the side of employees which helps them in embellishing of the company.The good communication and the relation between the employees and the ceo helps them to negate hiring of outside consultant companies. They believe that instead of wasting the time and money hiring the consultants they should provide best environment to the employees this helps them to release the work stress on the employees which results in efficient and laudable work.
In the conclusion, it is clear that instead of hiring outside consultants to improve the efficiency the companies should invest more time listening to their own employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...oney hiring the consultants they should provide best environment to the employees this helps...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29299363057 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8877958169 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 215.323595506 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.394904458599 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.7797111477 60.3974514979 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.2 118.986275619 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 23.4991977007 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433737400737 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196258227185 0.0831039109588 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.232275571492 0.0758088955206 306% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.358357245506 0.150359130593 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.242504128228 0.0667264976115 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.1639044944 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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