It is necessary to hire an outside eye (personnel) who is unbiased in every way possible to help a company grow effectively. Most times when a company listen to their employees on matters that will help the company operate effectively, one would equate it is just like bringing everybody's bias together and choosing the one that makes sense the most, however, the end is likely a negative outcome. Looking at a company needing forensic auditing to help balance its account books and make its profit and losses straight is a good scenario to explain this need for hiring an outside consultant. A worker in the company who is culpable of extravagant spending of the company resources will most likely be subtly inciting his/her friend in the accounts section to lead the forensic auditing process, bearing in mind that his extravagancies can be overlooked. However, hiring someone who is not in any way acquainted with the company workers presents a good opportunity to get a good audit report. One might argue that hiring a neutral or new person or consultant to look into the affairs of a company he/she is not familiar with can be demanding, as the consultant has to first understand the operating principles of the company. hence this is where the term expert comes into play, In each needed area of suggestions in moving the company forward, an expert in that area is consulted. For auditing mentioned earlier, a good auditor with a proven track record is consulted, for procurement, a procurement expert is consulted, for safety operations in the company, a health and safety expert is consulted to possibly establish a safety department in the company.
Consulting is a very important aspect of industrial operation, that is made of people with seasoned experience in academia and industry, experience they say is the best teacher. So any company that is ready to make the bold step in improving its operational efficiency should always look for experts outside to help, to add to the forgoing argument, the employees that we might tend to listen to have been there from the onset when operational efficiency drew back.
Therefore it is time to look outside
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1225, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
...he operating principles of the company. hence this is where the term expert comes int...
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Line 1, column 1225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
...he operating principles of the company. hence this is where the term expert comes int...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...when operational efficiency drew back. Therefore it is time to look outside
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, look, so, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1801.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 364.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9478021978 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79190498153 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.3272749216 60.3974514979 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.727272727 118.986275619 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0909090909 23.4991977007 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30404982314 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113010421605 0.0831039109588 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442194964782 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175262947154 0.150359130593 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780076295144 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.1392134831 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.8420337079 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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