"Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible."
Above statement remind of us very famous quote from great physicist Albert Einstine that "Any fool can make things complex and difficult,but it requires a touch of genius to make tings simple and understandable."I totally agree with the statement that any one can create a complex problem but it requires a real effort and hard work to solve such problems. Greatest of the people ever to live on earth were problem solver not creators.
In a subject like science this thing become even more crucial.Just look at some of the greatest discoveries,like newton's laws of motion.Newton gave just three simple laws to describe and solve half of the problem in classical physics.At first glance one might not see any similarity between events like apple falling on earth and moon revolving around earth.But actually we can explain both the phenomenon just using newton's law of gravity.Any one can ask "why apple always fall on earth?",but to answer to that "why" took newton three years to find.
Similar is true specially in subject like mathematics.What mathematician do is he look at the real world make a model of a problem and then solve problem using some mathematical technique.Now to develop such technique and methods we need both induction and deduction reasoning.Induction reasoning is about finding patterns and making an abstract model and deduction reasoning is about solving the real world problem using that abstract model.
Also in any non scientific subjects like psychology,history,political science,economics similar pattern follows.Take for instance it is very easy to ask why hosing prices are rising or why interest rates are falling but to answer to this question requires effort and intelligence of an preeminent economist.Too in politics if a politician just point out the problems and blame others for people are not going to vote for them,because people need a solution to those problems.
However,In order to solve any problem one need to recognize the problem first.It also requires an effort to point out the problem.It takes data,statistics and continuous observation of a situation to actually point out a problem.Still,if it takes 10 hours to find what is wrong,means it can take 10 years to find a permanent solution.This is how humans has evolved.
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- "Anyone can make things bigger and more complex. What requires real effort and courage is to move in the opposite direction-in other words, to make things as simple as possible." 50
- Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 367.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33242506812 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.49649573253 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547683923706 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 23.0359550562 265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.053004617 60.3974514979 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.166666667 118.986275619 274% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.1666666667 23.4991977007 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 5.21951772744 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 7.80617977528 346% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159784798529 0.243740707755 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079489552535 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880577697057 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903375718739 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078295024228 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 14.1392134831 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.56 48.8420337079 20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.38706741573 128% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.4 11.2143820225 235% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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