"One can best understand the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities."
Major cities of any country are mostly the economic and financial capital of that country. Characteristics and traits of inhabitants of this cities are considered as characteristics of the whole country. Big cities like New York,London,Delhi,Paris are so dense with population that it seems as if this is the only culture and people that a country has.But one can not judge the whole society just by looking at major cities people and it's culture. There are significant difference between life style of a big city and of any rural areas. So definitely just major two or three cities are not the actual representative of a country.
For example in a country like india there is so much diversity and so many different cultures that one may not find any common traits among societies. There are more than 50 languages that are spoken in india.It just difficult to draw any conclusions about the characteristics of the whole India just by looking its major cities like Mumbai or delhi.Here mostly rural and urban cultures are vastly different. And majority of indian population lives in Rural areas.Unlike city people this rural population depends it's survival upon the agriculture.
This things are true for any country. Because there are just handful of major cities in any country and all the other areas are semi-urban or rural. Certainly this urban population is not the representative of the whole country.In any major city services sector and corporate culture is in domination on the other hand in rural areas we can see most of the people are depends upon agriculture.Both of this people live different life style.For example uraban people generally go to sleep at or after 12 am night,while rural people tend to sleep early and wake up early.Also there are differences in their looks and clothing styles.
Urban people specially in major cities are always tend to live a life of hurry while rural people prefer clam and peaceful life.Also urbanian's are hard working and mostly rural people prefer more leisure time.Also there are significant educational differences between them.Rural people are not as educated as urabans.So in support with above argument we can not say that any countries characteristics can be determined just by looking at it's major cities.
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- "One can best understand the most important characteristics of a society by studying its major cities." 50
- Many of the world's lesser-known languages are being lost as fewer and fewer people speak them. The governments of countries in which these languages are spoken should act to prevent such languages from becoming extinct. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 374.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10160427807 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98333422665 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449197860963 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 139.089199996 60.3974514979 230% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.0 118.986275619 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128440242467 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578160408542 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430706741491 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962892659241 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303538798903 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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