Best way for preparing young generation for leadership is through cooperation or competitiveness.
As we have heard many times that leadership needs standing number one above all, it does not mean imply that one should be very competitive to earn that position. It is earned through, thinking not just about oneself but everyone in the group. The one who understands the fellow beings and their weakness and strenghts and improving them is key feature.
For example if we consider Swamy Vivekananda from India, he is called leader of the nation. He practiced self-study and then looked out for others who are in need of help.
In our generation of increasing number in groups or associations, leaders play very important role. Successfull country needs a good leader because decision taken by them will be excecuted for any issue or cause. For a propsperous living, we need leaders who will think without selfcentric unlike leaders who will think selfcentric and wage wars against others.
Some may point out that without competitiveness, one will look like coward, not taking agrressive actions. It sometimes is true, but not excatly as healthy competitiveness is also a feature of leadership. Without healthy competiveness, invention can be lacking. A good leader also has a quality of thinking ahead of any problem and if there is a sudden depth issue, thinking out wisely and taking neccessary steps. Hence, coopeartion is the main key and self competance also important for oneself to take a role of leader for betterment of soceity.
- "Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. " 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 16
- Men and women, because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks. 16
- Cities plays a major role as they represent the State to the world. So it is important that we take care of the cities. Maintaining the cities is not a free factor, so i mostly agree that financial support must be provided for them to thrive.As being a ma 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
...ward, not taking agrressive actions. It sometimes is true, but not excatly as healthy compet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 239.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06276150628 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85270358669 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 215.323595506 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615062761506 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2390867399 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148171969965 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524556509165 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415515567111 0.0758088955206 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0891548599972 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296358216229 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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