The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In any field of profession, competition encourages people to work better and do better than others which acts as a energy that drives them due to which productivity increases. Competiton along with cooperation is needed but cooporation will only help someone to work harmoniously but not as much productively. Therefore, the best way for a society to prepare its young prople for leadership in the field of government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of competition, not cooperation.
A young leader in any government position will always be a target of the experienced ones and they will obviously try to bring the young ones down in order to show their dominance and power. A competitive nature leader will surely try to go against this showcase of power by proving his or her own worth by expressing the knowledge within them. A competitive leader will do whatever it takes for the progress of the nation wether it be going against the experienced opition or anyone that will come in the way. In the other hands, a leader who is taught to focus on cooperation may not want to disappoint anyone and keep a harmonious environment. This may be a weakness which others might want to pounce upon.So, a competitive nature leader is needed for the progress of the country.
We have seen innovation in industry and technology throught the generations. The longest bridge and tallest skyscrapers we see today is a result of sense of competiton among the engineers. The discovery of pre stressed concrete inorder to build longer and longer bridges came through competition with others. In the past, very little span of bridges were present but now we can what humans can achieve. If there was no sense of beating the rivals, even if it was due to the ego of human, we would not be capable of discovering the human potential.
Technology is advancing on a daily basis. Few years ago we would have smartphones with very little storage capacity and we would have to buy memory card to insert in the smartphones. But as competition grew new smartphones came and they integrated chips due to which the phones would not require memory cards because a lot of memory could be stored in it. As a result of this memory cards vanished. This is just an example of one of the features of the smart phones. Due to increase in the competition we now have low cost phones with many new features. It is only possible because they have to compete against multi billion companies such as Apple, Samsung, etc.
Competition brings forth the ability within a person which he or she may not realise. It brings a person out of their comfort zone and makes the person want to learn better and do better. Competition brings innovation and the history has been an example for that. It is the human nature and that is how the potential of a human comes out. Hence, rather than teaching a fledging leader to be more cooperative, it will be beneficial to all if the novice leader is taught to compete.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 58
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
...and do better than others which acts as a energy that drives them due to which p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thers which acts as a energy that drives them due to which productivity increases...
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Line 3, column 346, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y expressing the knowledge within them. A competitive leader will do whatever it ...
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Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...or the progress of the nation wether it be going against the experienced opition o...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... which others might want to pounce upon.So, a competitive nature leader is needed ...
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Line 7, column 357, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a lot of memory could be stored in it. As a result of this memory cards vanished....
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...n companies such as Apple, Samsung, etc. Competition brings forth the ability wit...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...zone and makes the person want to learn better and do better. Competition brings innov...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2478.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72916955133 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487619047619 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 788.4 704.065955056 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3553872085 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.12 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266962374804 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633424752357 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128344548887 0.0758088955206 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152051407548 0.150359130593 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170106543646 0.0667264976115 255% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 100.480337079 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.