The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I agree with the assertion that to prepare young minds for leadership roles in government, industry or other fields, it is fundamental to instil a sense of cooperation in them and not competition. Being a leader demands several qualities of good communication, decision-making and coordination.
Even though it can be considered a crucial aspect but it is not sufficient enough for one to just excel in academics. To be in a position where you have to be open to everyone's point of view, even when it can conflict with your own notion about the problem at hand, you must have a sense of cooperation.
At a young age, children are filled with enthusiasm and are zealous. Being competitive and comparing one's self with peers is a characteristic that can be seen in almost all children. Thus, at this time, it is important to make them understand how to cooperate and how to be considerate.
In order to make our young people brilliant leaders, we have to ensure that they learn important life skills along the way to gaining academic knowledge for their bright futures.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree wi 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ealous. Being competitive and comparing ones self with peers is a characteristic tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 442.535393258 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85326086957 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0115120567 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635869565217 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 704.065955056 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3971775567 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.625 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19060753383 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781211484504 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090572606776 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116159036782 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689373620368 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.