The preparation of a society's youths for leadership is, indeed, a necessity as this promotes continuity in the different spheres of life, as they saying goes that "the youths are the tomorrow". The prompt asserts that the best way for a society to prepare its young for leadership, in any sense, is by imbibing and promoting a sense of cooperation in them rather than a competitive spirit. I mostly agree with In my opinion, I think the prompt is overstated, thus , I mostly agree that a cooperative spirit be printed instilled in the youth, but not at the detriment of competition for two reasons.
To begin, it is pertinent that a leader should possess diverse qualities which promotes coeperation. Honesty, a listening ear, tactfulness, and boldness are apt to achieve a common goal.
If these qualities and skills are fostered in young individuals, as there these you dividuals, it would enhance their ability and prepare them for the future. Take for instance, in a primary school setting, if pupils engage in extracurricular activities such as debates (for boldness and critical thinking). In the home, a mother would ensure that her eldest son helps his younger siblings in their homeworks and keep the house in order when she is not around. If she comes home, she lauds him for things welldone and corrects his wrong doings. Over the years, a pupil who have passed through the above instances will be able to engage effectively in teamwork and this cooperation would make him stand out as a leader.
Furthermore, the ability of an individual to work with others directly affects the outcome expected and promotes the society if the expectations are realised. For instance, in a hospital setting, if a woman who is about to put to bed is admitted, the nurses, work hand-in-glove with the doctors to ensure the safe arrival the baby and ensure the health of the mother. If, for any reason, there are clashes or rants or any form of discord, this could lead to negligence of the pregnant woman and possibly death.
Au contraire, a leader whose thoughts are full of competition may not realise the true purpose for which he has was chosen. However, a "healthy" competition could promote the critical thinking skills required of a Leader. Finally, the young of the society should be imbibed with the recessary qualities which would make them co-operative in future, promoting team work which would lead to the achievement of a common set goal.
- The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In d
- Claim Any piece of information referred to as a fact should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future Reason Much of the information that people assume is factual actually turns out to be inaccurate 33
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, thus, well, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96144578313 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90324015423 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542168674699 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 642.6 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5065711832 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6875 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303233533547 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899941190662 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116374657974 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141541729027 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126434167106 0.0667264976115 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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