The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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In order to reach goals, leaders needs to work with others; therefore, cooperative relationship will foster effectiveness more than competition.
It is a long-established fact that competition forces people to leave their comfort zone, work harder, and exceed their former limits; however, comparison of an individual with others will bring a sense of individualism, which is detrimental to team work, cooperation, and harmony inside an organization.
First of all, everyone confesses that lofty goals cannot become reality with the contribution of only one individual. Leaders help their employees to set the goals, priorities, create a positive work environment in which group work gives the most efficient and effective result.
Moreover, competition may be detrimental to preserve internal organizational relationships, harmony and camaraderie; therefore, leader's encouragement towards competitive mindset will tear the team apart. As a result, a leader will merely supervise certain number of self-oriented individual employees instead of a whole group. Azerbaijani proverb also illustrates this case with a laconic demonstration. It is easy to tear apart 7 tree branches one by one; however, it is impossible to break only one bunch of 7 tree branches. Simply, competition will create such seven individual braches making them vulnerable to external dangers.
Finally, competition makes people compare themselves with others. Such mindset not only create "me vs them" perspective, but also establishes 'winner gets all' based results. As a result, any failure, even a single one, although there may be tons of success examples before, will demotivate employees, make them lose their motivation and interest in what they are doing, and even leave the job altogether. Lest it happen, leaders should work hard to prevent such destructive work environment.
To conclude, a leader is an indispensable part of the organization. Their role is to give direction, motivation, and encouragement to realize organizatinal goals. Cooperation is the most helpful, effective, and sustainable method that leaders need to adopt; nevertheless, they should also be aware of the effect of competition among their groups because competitive environment may bring sense of self-orientedness, individualist approach towards achievement of the organizational goals
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 346.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82658959538 5.05705443957 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38690838148 2.79657885939 121% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601156069364 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.208220903 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.625 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.056020486102 0.243740707755 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0182608287541 0.0831039109588 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0261822817131 0.0758088955206 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0318491407719 0.150359130593 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276437788445 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 48.8420337079 68% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.1639044944 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.8971910112 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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