"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Youth is the first resource of any country. If there is more number of young people than growth rate of country will be higher than that of another country. But this young mind must be directed towards right path. In this issue, author is stating that for preparing its young people, cooperation is required not competition. I agree with the author to some extent only.
As I have said, youth is the major resource, preparing of youth is critical task. Government, Parents need to be focus well on shaping. This is because young mind is going to decide the future of the country. As we know that when there is a small tree and want to shape it, than it is easier task. But when it is getting mature, and then after if we want to shape, then it will be difficult task.
For leadership in government, industry, or other fields, if young mind is having attitude of working with brotherhood, helping nature then it is positive sign for society and country. But only this nature will not work properly. Without doubt this attitude, this is a very good point. But along with this, we need competition among young mind. If this happens, than some creative & Productive things will be coming out. This will really faster our country's growth.
Competition among each other should not be cruel one, it needs to be productive. This is required along with cooperation. For example, if country is working only with cooperation among each other might lead to another worst thing possible, like terrorism. Because if there is no competition, people will not try for out of box thinking. People in government also needs competition among each other, than and than only they will try for good things for showing him/her self as a better one. This is also true for industry or other fields.
There is another example for same case. In era of 1950-1970, in India, growth rate of country was very much lower. So, Government decided to give proper medium of competition. This helped really well for progressing faster. So, it is true competition is required along with cooperation.
In the end, I can conclude that Cooperation + Competition = Development of World. This may be the key of success for any country.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'for example', 'it is true']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219679633867 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.157235817809 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0846681922197 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0526315789474 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0389016018307 0.0444667217837 87% => OK
Prepositions: 0.153318077803 0.12292977631 125% => OK
Participles: 0.0366132723112 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.53684611619 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0183066361556 0.030933414821 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0823798627002 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0274599542334 0.0249443105267 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0045766590389 0.0148568991511 31% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2258.0 2732.02544248 83% => OK
No of words: 383.0 452.878318584 85% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8955613577 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.302872062663 0.366273622748 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21409921671 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.140992167102 0.200843997647 70% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.088772845953 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53684611619 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 219.290929204 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485639686684 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 51.8992141587 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6194690265 141% => OK
Sentence length: 13.2068965517 23.380412469 56% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5200832479 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8620689655 141.124799967 55% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2068965517 23.380412469 56% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.379310344828 0.674092028746 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 34.6168182227 51.4728631049 67% => OK
Elegance: 1.64220183486 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321347352283 0.391690518653 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101568657109 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0979901329275 0.077325440228 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.453651157458 0.547984918172 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.123551925975 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104275630084 0.161403998019 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730662912765 0.0892212321368 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.31049961214 0.385218514788 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0624212508763 0.0692045440612 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206755467298 0.275328986314 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408851067675 0.0653680567796 63% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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