More or less, leadership is the name of cooperation and symphty. It is a softskill that cannot build through the urge of competition. I highly agrees with the statement. Leadership in any place or in any field is related to the public-how to become best for others.
Firstly, if an example of government is highlighted; in 1947 when Pakistan came into being it was Muhammad Ali Jinnah who contributed to his best to make an independent state for Muslims, It was the leadership that created an independent country. In this example, the leadership in Jinnah arose due to cooperation with his collegues, and due to the love for the worthy people. Leadership is like an emotions that is real and one cannot achieve by ill will of competition. Like a recent example of newly elected Prime Minister of Pakistan, he became Prime minister due to his cooperation with the public that is why He is elected as a Prime Minister of democratic government of Pakistan.
Secondly, if one take an example of industry or any career; again, here leadership is due to the cooperation. When majority choose a leader, the decision is solely depends on the favouritism for that person and this is caused by the cooperation with others rather than the competition. If an example of a project leader is taken, a person automatically became the leader due to his skills, and others' confidence in him.
However, competition leads to jelousy, and ill will for others. Competition arises when one is afraid of others victory, or when one have no confidence in himself. Unfortunately our elders are misguiding the youngers- to be more competative rather than having love and affection for others to make a healty society. As, youth will be now become future leaders; it is necessary for the parents or teachers to teach the cooperation rather than the competition to the young ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'agree'
Suggestion: agree
...rough the urge of competition. I highly agrees with the statement. Leadership in any p...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an emotion' or simply 'emotions'?
Suggestion: an emotion; emotions
...r the worthy people. Leadership is like an emotions that is real and one cannot achieve by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 316.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89873417722 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91835298914 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474683544304 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9463685312 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.2 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187743642195 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664085761272 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434711764116 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121444363046 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259148101791 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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