The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
If you ask me the, givern a field - may it's government, industry - cooperation is necessary between individuals. A big projects are not one man's job. Such as space projects which NASA, ISRO etc does, are not done by any one man.
As I said team is working behind the prjects, team means more persons, more brains. In the cooperate world, when a company decides to make a product there are number of architects working on the design of product. They architect the product with help of each other, one architech finds the loop whole in other's design. In this way they come up with best possible design.
So on and so forth, in government, making large programs benificial to the country requires thinking of all the residents. They need to think about the diversity of the country. In India, last year 2017, ther was smart Hackathon program. In which, a HRD(Human Resource Department) of India, asked some engineering instituations the solutions for the problems of the country. However, no one knows what problem the country has. So, HRD asked other departments to give them the problem statements. All the departments gave their problems. There were diversity of problems needed to be solved.
However, while the cooperation need to be seeded in young childrens. Only compitions will shape the best individuals. An exam like GRE allows to filter out the best minds to go into the prestigious universities.
So, Cooperation what makes big projects thrive, and only best minds can carry out big projects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 253.0 442.535393258 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94861660079 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72298092982 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2369222664 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.8947368421 118.986275619 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3157894737 23.4991977007 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.89473684211 5.21951772744 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114028219823 0.243740707755 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0294389502376 0.0831039109588 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325940496734 0.0758088955206 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528294489131 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.013162869936 0.0667264976115 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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