The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
I would partially agree that cooperation would be the best way to prepare its upcoming citizens to take active part in leadership in any field. In these present situations, a huge competition is present among people in their respective fields and so that the children should be aware of those and have to be ready to face them.
Cooperation just deals with how to cope up with people in achieving a task, how to help one's subordinates in doing an work, how to handle the situations with other organization and come to a treaty. This is one of the prerequisties in leadership and it would be beneficial for the young people if they have been instilled on it.But,it solely doesn't helps. Competition, on the other hand is also an important characteristic, which an leader should possess. According to the claim, if competetion is been neglected, then one can't be a successfull leader.
Now a days, competetion had been started from the childhood itself. In schools, competetion among students to become pupil leader had become rivalry, coming to sports, competition is to be faced become two groups to win championship, talking about the Government, competition is to be faced by the opponents for a nationalized position etc., In almost all fields, if one has to be successfull, he must face a severe competition and so people should also be instilled with competition. If there were not, they might be depressed at the moment when they are not able to stand against competition.
Summing up, both the cooperation and competition are the characteristics which a leader should possess, and they must be instilled in children from the school itself, and they should have awareness in the society, i.e., how should they deal with people to become a leader.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree 50
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...people in achieving a task, how to help ones subordinates in doing an work, how to h...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... how to help ones subordinates in doing an work, how to handle the situations with...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...eople if they have been instilled on it.But,it solely doesnt helps. Competition, on...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...le if they have been instilled on it.But,it solely doesnt helps. Competition, on th...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...have been instilled on it.But,it solely doesnt helps. Competition, on the other hand i...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...also an important characteristic, which an leader should possess. According to the...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...competetion is been neglected, then one cant be a successfull leader. Now a days,...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...en one cant be a successfull leader. Now a days, competetion had been started from the ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ne cant be a successfull leader. Now a days, competetion had been started from the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pil leader had become rivalry, coming to sports, competition is to be faced becom...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'as to', 'talking about', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.20303030303 0.240241500013 85% => OK
Verbs: 0.184848484848 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0636363636364 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0363636363636 0.0497285424764 73% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0454545454545 0.0444667217837 102% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109090909091 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0545454545455 0.0406280797675 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.99692249929 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0515151515152 0.030933414821 167% => OK
Particles: 0.00606060606061 0.0016655270985 364% => OK
Determiners: 0.0969696969697 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0363636363636 0.0249443105267 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212121212121 0.0148568991511 143% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1758.0 2732.02544248 64% => OK
No of words: 296.0 452.878318584 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93918918919 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.58838876751 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.337837837838 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.22972972973 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182432432432 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14527027027 0.132149295362 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99692249929 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 219.290929204 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530405405405 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 53.858791099 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 29.6 23.380412469 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.9838370644 59.4972553346 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.8 141.124799967 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6 23.380412469 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 0.674092028746 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 52.572972973 51.4728631049 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.375 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381810035094 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.123536348155 0.123202303941 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0507480438984 0.077325440228 66% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.607024322232 0.547984918172 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.218940213559 0.149214159877 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171446493197 0.161403998019 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742487190175 0.0892212321368 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.377740374975 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0244661423017 0.0692045440612 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267729245494 0.275328986314 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458752970876 0.0653680567796 70% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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