The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Man is social being and to live in the society we need to help one another. In the society, we acquire different virtues which help us to shape our lives such as leadership. While many say that, without competion you can't develop leadership, it is actually a virtue, people develop by helping others and developing some rational qualities. In this paragraph, the devlopment of leadership will be discussed and how cooperating with other people develops fine leadership will be analyzed.
Leadership is a combinational of many earthly qualities and certaily it can't be taught by an institution. It is a self development virtue that people acquire by mixing in the society. It can be devloped by reading books and papers but first one should go out and socialize with other people to realize their problems and how their problems allign with his own problem and how they can do to solve these problems. One of the main qualities of leadership is problem solving quality and without talking to other people a leader won't grasp the gravity of the situation and that's why cooperating with other people is much important.
A leader should be true to his words and he should deliver or try heart and soul to deliver his promises. And sometimes to achieve his promises, he needs help from others not competition. There is much chance of winning while working with other people rather working alone and compete with other people to achieve the same goal. A leader should have the understanding to know the differences and a true leader will make an ally of people who has the same target.
A leader should know when to step back. He must realize the true meaning for a competition. If cooperaation is possible a leader should identify that and work through this process. The world would be a much better place if leaders and presidents around the world would forget the differences and work towards the same objectives. While it is important to compete with other countries for economic solvency and security, a leader should have the quality to prioritize the issues. Even the most mythical character Superman works with a team. A true leader is the one who can bring the ultimate success and ninety percent of the time it is achieved through cooperation. Slavery was destroyed, labor law was passed through cooperation of people of all kind. Leaders should have the virtue to distinguish theses differences.
Man is naturally a social being and we work better when we are together. In each leader their lies certain qualities to bring the people together and to cooperate to achieve the same prospect. A good leader is one who can unite people, not divide them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 454.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85682819383 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.647108852 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480176211454 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9730646359 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.875 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139243156512 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427693810105 0.0831039109588 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404600810321 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080128733677 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234158059605 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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