The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The next generation always surpasses the previous generation. To make the next generation leaders better we have teach them how to cooperate with others rather than compete. one must not compete for leadership position, they have to earn it.
Firstly, A leader is the one who leads the pack, teaches them to grow, survive. To create a leader, society must teach them a sense of cooperation not competition. competition is good for an extent to bring out their full potential but if the candidate gets desperate for the position he may turn to dark side and try to impede the others down. such candidates may get the position but can't make good leaders.
Secondly, if they learn to cooperate with others and help them they can be great leaders like Abhram Lincon,Martin Luther King Jr.,Gandhi. these leaders had people follow them for the whole revolution they created because they cooperated with the people and offered them more than hope, A chance of better life. if we want to create such leaders from young people for the future we must instil the qualities of Perseverance, morality, cooperation and Respect.
The younger generation can view the position of a leader as a prestige which can instil a sense of competition and it gives way to hatred. This could be bad because eventually if they get their way to the position. they will succumb to it to keep that position for the taste of power, money and these type of leaders are not suitable for the future.
So, To create prepare the next generation for the leadership position we have to instil them a sense of cooperation, morality not competition, which should be used to draw their potential not to give way to Authority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'taught'.
Suggestion: taught
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Suggestion: One
...perate with others rather than compete. one must not compete for leadership positio...
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Suggestion: Competition
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Suggestion: Such
...side and try to impede the others down. such candidates may get the position but can...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...uch candidates may get the position but cant make good leaders. Secondly, if they...
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Suggestion: If
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Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62490774038 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508591065292 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6999550763 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293998726452 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100629752723 0.0831039109588 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754212930505 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173077415626 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557950837834 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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