The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instill in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
There are many qualities needed to become a leadership. The prompt suggests that the best way to prepare for leadership in multiple fields is by teaching them to cooperate, not competing. However, one of the definition of a leader is to be the best, which requires competition among each other. But there are still benefits from learning to cooperate. From my perspective, I partially disagree with the prompt.
First of all, competition selects the best candidates for the leader position. Take, for example, in a classroom, an academically strong kid is selected for the class-leader position. This kid is selected because the teacher knows that he or she has the required knowledge to manage the whole class, thus gains respect from other kids. This position is not for everyone, therefore the teacher has already carefully chosen among the best kids in the classroom, which in this case is a form of competition. This concepts applies through out the life, where the leaders must be among the best and have the quality in order to at least deserve the reverence from the people, and to be able to perform. A president of the country cannot be someone who is not able to speak fluently.
Secondly, the leader must maintain the best quality to stay in the competition. Take, for example, a president of the United States has two terms, each term has 4 years. In order to successfully land the second election, the person must proved that he or she has already done the best to contribute to the country, maintained this performance throughout the first 4 years. Afterwards, the current president has to compete with other candidates, proving that he or she can handle the task better than the others, which ultimately strengthen his or her competitiveness. When a person manage to proved to maintain all such qualities and surpass other candidates, it is a concrete evidence that this person is inevitably the true leader.
However, there are fields that requires more sense of cooperation than the competition. In business, it is more beneficial for companies to incorporate to achieve the same goal, which is making profit. For example, Apple and Samsung are two big competitors in the smart phone field, but they sells electronic devices to each other to create different machines. The sense of competition is still in the air, but cooperation generate much more revenues than originally when the two companies fight each other for each customer.
In conclusion, a generalization which he best way to make a leadership is to train them to cooperate or compete is absurd and not true to all situation. Depending on the field and the proven ability, people will know who is the best to choose among the leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, thus, as to, at least, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 458.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96943231441 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82179878583 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478165938865 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 703.8 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2725486691 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.454545455 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231816387838 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071858170574 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543125495372 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142075087078 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428486559352 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.