Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
College and institution are among the most important place for students to seek guidance on career path. Students are practiced and trained by professors and closet to real world industry employees and employers who could bring them valuable experience. Base on these facts and others, the prompt recommends students to pick a highly beneficial career. Although a lucrative career might be a positive goal for one to follow, there two different reasons that outweight the immediate benefit.
To begin, money is one great reason to follow a career. It is undeniable that having a strong financial ability tremendously bolster a students life. In the United States, among the best colleges in the world, researches depict that more than 60 percent of college students use student loan to pay tuition. Moreover, many students live an autonomous life, independent from their parents, thus live their life paying back the college loan. It is highly important that after graduation, student manage to get a beneficial job so as to guaruantee a finanncial ability to afford life needs and pay the loan. A seemingly interesting job, but realistically low-income one can be a burden to carry for the rest of one's life. Therefore, aiming for money is a good cause.
However, events from the past show multiple cases of changing in job demand in the industry -- or on the other hand, a 'hot' job of a period might be a 'dying' one in another period. In the 1960s and 1970s, nuclear energy related job thrives in the market. The needs of nuclear energy to support electricity and power skyrocketted, leading to high demand, thus employee in this field had much easier time to find and settle down on this job. But, after 1980s, the nuclear engery field job demand gruadually decreased because of advancing machine replacing dangerous work of the employee and more importantly, cleaner and cheaper energy. To follow nuclear energy job is considered a noble cause, a risk of not only affordability but also health safety. In the current day, computer engineering is a trend in the market, which lead to the immediate question: "How long from now can be people live off this job?" Facebook and Google is aming at machine learning and artificial intelligence to speed up the work and potentially replace human worker. Of course, there will still be job for machine manufacturing or maintainace, but it is an inevitable truth that machine can perform significantly better without error. With the inconsistency in job market, one needs to be flexible and well-prepared to face changes in the future.
Last but not least, the ability to deliver fine work comes from one's passion and commitment. Happiness, or passion is a strong motivation above all of a good and consistent performance. There is one famous saying: "If you love your job, you will never have to work a day in your life". Take, for example, a previous highschool soccer player working in an accounting desk job. The person will have to sit behind the desk reading data and writing documents for the rest of his or her career, while looking at a famous soccer wallpaper in the background. Not to say that this person could not do the job, but the quality and consistency in the long run will plummet. Passion and commitment is a great cause to achieve goals in life. A passionate student is willing to spend his ample time doing and researching about his favorite subject, later proved to be experienced and fluent in performing the job than the one who does not have practice.
In the current industry world, it is hard to state the true cause behind the success of a person in career life. Some people might have to work in an uninteresting but high pay job for life reasons, meanwhile others follow their passion and dream job. The decision to choose a career path is best to let the individual carefully decide.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...inancial ability tremendously bolster a students life. In the United States, among the b...
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Line 3, column 526, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... student manage to get a beneficial job so as to guaruantee a finanncial ability to affo...
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Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...an be a burden to carry for the rest of ones life. Therefore, aiming for money is a ...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ability to deliver fine work comes from ones passion and commitment. Happiness, or p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for example, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 33.0 14.8657303371 222% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3231.0 2235.4752809 145% => OK
No of words: 658.0 442.535393258 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9103343465 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06473204393 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72299495798 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 337.0 215.323595506 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512158054711 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 1001.7 704.065955056 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7527145168 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.7 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 10.2758426966 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106952584061 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282764596677 0.0831039109588 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0236306598193 0.0758088955206 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0624984376156 0.150359130593 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197689029514 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 100.480337079 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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