The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In modern days young people are considered to be pillars of society and their involvement in many fields improves the efficiency of the outcome. The claim here suggests that for the best society young people are to be be prepared for leadership in government, industry by making them learn a sense of cooperation rather than competition. In my opinion, I partially agree with this claim because the competition is required for a person to excel in leadership along with cooperation. This can be explained in the following ways.
Firstly, Competition makes people more attentive and hardworking. This brings the best out of people. In the olden days, a prince is chosen to be king only when he is at his best when compared to his rival. That means this didn't get started from here and started from the past. During that period young people who are chosen to be prince were trained in all aspects and then many competitions were held to check the best of them. In this way, a leader is chosen. This illustrates that people when in the competition can perform at their best.
Secondly, In modern society also competition plays quite an important role. For example, the modern education system conducts a lot of exams to increase the standards and skills of students if only people are competitive can be excelled in this part as here cooperation causes chaos situation as it maintains equality. This is states competition is to be given utmost priority in young people's life.
lastly, Not all times the competition is helpful to bring leadership but sometimes competition along with cooperation brings out the best leader. For example, The Dharavi moment was a slum that is calumniated by a local don and people are sent notices to vacate the area. The people in that area cooperated among themselves and formed a unity and choose their leader to fight against the crimes. This moment was inspired by many such moments happened in the past and get motivated by them. This tells that sometimes cooperation along with the competition is helpful.
In conclusion, if someone tells that only cooperation can bring leadership this means they are ready to leave as a slave. Any leader is born in the competion with peers and sometimes both together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93963254593 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68535364524 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490813648294 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.1455616914 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.619047619 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237330202351 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689283926077 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871504348971 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133162388593 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112901298414 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.