The best way to understand the character of society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes and role models. Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
In times of hardship, it is irrefutable that we look up to our heroes and roles models in order to overcome them. They undoubtedly an intergral part of society. The author claims that one must scrutinize their character thoroughly in order to understand the character of society, as these are the paragons of ideals and morals a society upholds. This statement partially holds merit which can be inferred from the following three arguments.
The character of society should not solely be judged on the basis of the character of the role model it chooses as sometimes society may choose the wrong role models. For instance, Adolf Hitler was worshipped by many, yet was one of the most atrocious human beings to exist in history. Many also opposed him but could only do so in secrecy- due to the sheer majority of the support he received- and were never seen as role models which should have been ideal. To judge the entire German society on the sole basis of character of one bad man would be unfair. Sometimes people do choose the wrong heroes, but that does not imply that the society is hopeless as it will correct itself.
Futhermore, the role models we choose are often subjected to leniency when it comes to the judgment of their character. We often overlook the foibles that each of them possess as we are biased towards them. This can be observed when Trump was elected as the President of the United States, despite clearly being discriminatory towards immigrants and his misogynistic attitude towards women. This does not imply that the society accepts these ideals despite him getting immense support. This is further supported by the fact that he was impeached by the people and proves that in order to understand the true nature of society can be understood only when these role models are judged dispassionately.
In contrast, I do agree with the statement heroes and role models reveal the society’s highest values. It is because that these role models are constantly being looked upto that they must inculcate these values. For example, policemen are the most realistic form heroes that a common man can look upto. And this was the catalyst that spurred the Black Lives Matter movement when a role model failed to uphold the values the society values. Since these people are chosen by society and are constantly looked up to, they do not have any choice but to be the show exemplar moral character.
As we can see from the above examples, role models are not the only reflection of the character of society. The people themselves do play an integral role and define the society cherishes as its morals and ideals. The character of these role models do ihowever play a crucial role in upholding these values.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, may, so, for example, for instance, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 33.0505617978 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 469.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74200426439 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39687491175 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441364605544 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.2370786517 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 469.0 23.0359550562 2036% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 60.3974514979 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2224.0 118.986275619 1869% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 469.0 23.4991977007 1996% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 73.0 5.21951772744 1399% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466946057368 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.466946057368 0.0831039109588 562% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0758088955206 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301010150095 0.150359130593 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614572178752 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 235.4 14.1392134831 1665% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -404.56 48.8420337079 -828% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.92365168539 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 186.2 12.1743820225 1529% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.69 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 30.3 8.38706741573 361% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.8971910112 454% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 189.6 11.2143820225 1691% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 11.7820224719 458% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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