China has some innovation, but most it is well documented that it reverse engineers everything in its path. It is doubtful that China will have a real consumer middle class like U.S. and Europe.
China is not that innovative as the U.S and European countries,Industries of China generally don't have a good research and development team.Countries like U.S ,England ,Netherlands ,Ireland ,etc are much more innovative than the Chinese are.Chinese always the go with the flow of the development.I partially agree to the point mentioned by the author that they are far less innovative.
But I am not satisfied of the whole point that the author want to convey.I think the China will have a better middle class consumer than all other countries in few years to come.They may not be innovative like the others but they are well learned that how to use the resource that already have.
Population may sounds as the demerit of the country but they know how to make use of it.Human resource is one of the major resources that any country can have and it's only on how the country is making use of it.China has learned the way to use it in the most efficient way.
Mobile phones may not be invented by someone from China but if the current scenario shows that China is the major producer of it.They have got a very strong selling market specially in developing countries where people don't care about inventions ,rather they go for facilities in cheapest price.Most of the features that are provided by these Chinese manufacturer are not developed by them,rather they are developed by U.S or European developers.
Inventions,research,development,these terms were never the strength of China,but it's their marketing strategies,their resource utilization,their small scale industries which help China to dominate the world market and I think these strengths of China will help China to have more grip of the world market in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 288.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05208333333 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46960839118 2.79657885939 124% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545138888889 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2853853587 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 291.0 118.986275619 245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6 23.4991977007 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239066609145 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134639350398 0.0831039109588 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392320557086 0.0758088955206 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134639350398 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392320557086 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 14.1392134831 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 48.8420337079 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 12.1743820225 209% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.9 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.38706741573 116% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 11.8971910112 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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