Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
People might have seen some company or party stay in dominance and impede possible talent people succeeding in their fields. However, the suggestion that those in power need to step down in order to revitalize the field through new leadership can not justify itself as there are wealthy evidence showing such approach would not be realistic.
First and fore most, if a person is talented enough, he would stand out in the field even his precedent still active. Such cases are prevading in the field of business. Before Steve Jobs founded Apple Inc., there are already some well known companies that specialized in personal computer design and manufacture. It is innovation in design and providence to satisfy the needs of the market contributes to the accomplishment of Apple. Those previously dominant companies did not have a single thought to serrender the market but instead they made use of everything to avoid the flourishing of new companies. However, the leadership would not determined by whether the company is willing to give it up or not. In most of cases, it is the market as well as the comsumer decides the leadership.
It is also hard to identify a person to be in power. There might be several people in the position of leadership and even if they are asked to step down, it is highly possible that the new leaders are from the same party as those originally in power. For example, during the political election, the candidates who are usually from those famous parties, have some accomplishments and
- Argument Topic: "The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced 43
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years. 50
- The following appeared in a memo from the vice president of a food-distribution company with food-storage warehouses in several cities."Recently we signed a contract with The Fly-Away Pest-Control Company to provide pest-control services at our fast- 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 641, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'determine'
Suggestion: determine
...nies. However, the leadership would not determined by whether the company is willing to gi...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 711, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
...any is willing to give it up or not. In most of cases, it is the market as well as the comsum...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, still, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1262.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 258.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89147286822 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69799739669 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562015503876 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6241428697 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.166666667 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.21951772744 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132521555429 0.243740707755 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478299491998 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559723400365 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976136371879 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313873100019 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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