Claim - Leader Repu'
Reason- Media
Society usually regards some individuals as hero because of their heroic deeds, but it also expect high standards to be followed by them. The premise state that nowadays it is difficult to regard someone as hero as media scrutiny lead to revelation that tarnish the image of these heroes. While media scrutiny have made it difficult for heroes to maintain their status, I mostly disagree with the premise due to two reasons.
Admittedly, as media has become vibrant and its coverage is wide spread, so it is difficult to hide anything. Recently, another dimension of social media have made every one a kind of journalist with social media account. Nowadays, it is difficult for public figures to hide anything about their life and malfeasance acts from media. There are number of examples that surrounds us in which a number of public figures reputation is tarnished by media outlets. Usually, public figures private affairs and acts are exposed by media that not only lead to embarrassment for them, but also affect their career. Their image in the public eye got affected by this slanders sometimes as media reports are not always facts,and usually a tactic for rating. Therefore, media have make it difficult to retain heroic status.
However, media also play a very vital role in recognition of number of heroes whom we even first came to now with the help of media. There are numerous examples some of them are as follow. A teacher in China have denote his Kidney to his student, and a media outlet invited that perosn in its program to publicize not only a good act but to allow us to see thsi hero. Another example involves the recognition given to a firefighter who have endangered his life to save childs in a building on fire in India. This guy was reported by a news channel that lead to his recognition when he awarded a gallantry award. These examples shows media in identifying heroes and introducing them to us.
Secondly, media negative reporting not affect true heroes. For example, Franklin Rosevolt is regarded as great president of USA. After the death of FDR media outlets publish some reports regarding his affair with his mistress. This news didn't affect his image in eyes of US people who remember him as a great leader who helped USA during recession. Similarly, Ghandi and Martin Luther King are also came under media scrutiny after their death. There are many news reports about Ghandi moral decline and indulgence in debauchery. MLK was reported as spectator while a rape recently in a newspaper, however these reports are not going to change the services these heroes have for their people.
In a nutshell, even though media scrutiny have made it almost impossible for public figures to hide anything, but media role as identifier of heroes can not be disregarded. In addition, a 'true Hero' image is not affected by such scrutiny in the eyes of those for whom he act as saviour.
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- Claim - Leader Repu'Reason- Media 50
- University should allow variety of subjects 62
- Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...es as media reports are not always facts,and usually a tactic for rating. Therefore,...
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... are numerous examples some of them are as follow. A teacher in China have denote his Kid...
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...rutiny in the eyes of those for whom he act as saviour.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86573146293 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5086642685 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488977955912 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 797.4 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1006510202 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.12 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.96 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133225661685 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045431520857 0.0831039109588 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034627986956 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811732792036 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272549286606 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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