Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Educated population plays a very important role in the development of a nation. Every country try to put resources in this sector. Education sector comprise of many components but two important elements are students and teachers. The prompt suggests that teachers should decide curriculum of a subject by keeping in mind interests of students. I am mostly agree with the statement.
Firstly, Interest is most important factor in learning so a student can learn something with alacrity if it is penchant to his/her interests. For example, if there are two students one pursuing his/her interest while other is in same discipline based on his/her parents interest. Their behavior towards learning that particular subject will be totally disparate. One having interest will learn subject matters with interest and his ultimate goal will be to make mark in that particular area while other student will not show that level of zeal. So, at the end of day, one student will be a exemplar for others to pursue interests that belongs to you and avoid doing things force on you by others. It shows having curriculum in line with student interest will help him/her better to progress in his life. He will learns better and ultimately apply it in a betterway.
Secondly, when you are pursuing your field of interest you enjoy your work. For example, if a student having interest in photography and he pursue engineering. He will never feel satisfied with his area of work consequently results in a boring living throughout his career. While working on a project in some bucolic area he will try to capture that beauty in different angles rather than building a powerplant there. So, interest also help us in having equanimity.
In contrast, at early age assessing students aptitude and recommending them some pertinent field of interest is also a good option that can be exercise. If a student allow educators to set content for him/her that may help in a way that teachers based on their experience of dealing with students can recommend better contents. For example, if a teacher of Biology class asked students about content and related subjects to this area then students may not be able to provide something better or effective than teacher. As teacher based on his/her experience and knowledge of advances in field can recommend better contents and related subjects that helps student to bolster their fundamental concepts in the given area of study. That’s why, educator’s can be in a better position and recommend more germane contents.
In short, students interest must be considered as they are the one who are going to pursue that particular field during their life span but teachers experience and holistic view of the field can be a beneficial complement, that will have salubrious results.
- Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 66
- University should allow variety of subjects 62
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...ources in this sector. Education sector comprise of many components but two important eleme...
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Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...mind interests of students. I am mostly agree with the statement. Firstly, Interest...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ct will be totally disparate. One having interest will learn subject matters with...
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Line 3, column 397, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to subject'
Suggestion: to subject
...arate. One having interest will learn subject matters with interest and his ultimate ...
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Line 3, column 591, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... at the end of day, one student will be a exemplar for others to pursue interests...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... force on you by others. It shows having curriculum in line with student interest...
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Line 3, column 817, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'learn'
Suggestion: learn
...better to progress in his life. He will learns better and ultimately apply it in a bet...
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Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...to progress in his life. He will learns better and ultimately apply it in a betterway....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pply it in a betterway. Secondly, when you are pursuing your field of interest ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r work. For example, if a student having interest in photography and he pursue en...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'pursues'.
Suggestion: pursues
...having interest in photography and he pursue engineering. He will never feel satisfi...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... a boring living throughout his career. While working on a project in some bucolic ar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ere. So, interest also help us in having equanimity. In contrast, at early ag...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st also help us in having equanimity. In contrast, at early age assessing stud...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in contrast, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 33.0505617978 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2351.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 463.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0777537797 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72182107608 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490280777538 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9523939011 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.217391304 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1304347826 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17391304348 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147361759971 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516036928127 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050484144122 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819085375232 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350967363504 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 100.480337079 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.