University should allow variety of subjects

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University should allow variety of subjects

Education plays a vital role in national development by producing educated citizen that can form a civilized society and can play their part in the country progress. The premise states that universities should make it possible that students take a variety of courses outside their field of study. While taking courses outside of your area of study is ineffective for some students, I mostly agree with the statement due to two reasons.

First of all, all students are not the same in terms of their potential and interest in specific fields. So, it may become complicated for those students, who are not interested in subjects outside their field of study, to perform well in all subjects and support this idea. In this case, it will be time waste for these students as they are not going to get benefit from this policy. Let's take an example, a student of Biology is not interested in Math at all, and the university imposed this recommendation on that kind of students as well. It will not only affect this student time allocation but also result in stress to deal with subjects that are not matching with their taste. Therefore, imposing this recommendation without taking in consideration this side will result in not beneficial results as expected.

However, this recommendation will help students get an understanding of related subjects and can improve their career prospects. For example, if a law student takes a criminology subject, it will help him in his future while dealing with criminal cases. Similarly If, a student of Biology, have to study computer science will help him to use knowledge of computer science in his field and consequently improve his work efficiency. If we see the job market, we came to know that it is changing widely. Nowadays, people are changing their job every ten years, so if a person is having exposure to a wide variety of subjects, it will help to deal with changing job prospects. Thus, a student can get a lot of benefits from having a variety of subjects in his resume.

Secondly, the field of science and technology relies considerably on interdisciplinary research these days. To get benefit from a merger of different subjects, students must study different subjects. Let's take an example: studying Biology and Computer Science at a time can lead to a new field of Bioinformatics. Similarly, studying the field of Biology with Mechanics can lead to a new branch of BioMechanics. So, there is a lot of potential for innovation by merging different areas.

In sum, even though sometimes taking a variety of subjects is overwhelming and may lead to stress in students, it can help students in their career and can also result in the development of new fields.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, of course, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2270.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94553376906 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85898387695 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453159041394 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 707.4 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8173725762 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.095238095 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52380952381 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124318696375 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412220524708 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604846505164 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733829060819 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03856165375 0.0667264976115 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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