Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
Reason: All actions — even those that seem to be done for other people — are based on self-interest.
The claim and reason are completely linked with each other as well as glancing back through the oldest centuries to the present era, the human's tendency is that "No pain
No Gain". The individual doesn't interested to do the work for the others without the benefit of their own sake. I completely agree with the reason given here because even the people from the High society to Lower class everyone does human welfare if their own hands are filled with a plethora of benefits.
Primarily, the fundamental reason to support my point of view is there are a majority of well-known charity organizations they do lots of social work and collect too much
fund from the government, social platforms, privates firms etc, but these organizations are work for their own growth in the market. For instance, there are many NGO's
which are governed by the government officials and some are the NGO's run by private firms both of the governing people claim that they work for the human welfare's and even
though they help the poor people, not for the benefit of the individuals they do for being in competition in the market and get more funds from the other sources. Thus, they are working for their own NGO's progress, not for the individual help.
Secondly, As mentioned in the claim no act is done for the benefits of others is purely true as we see there are many famous personalities in various fields like celebrities,
, politicians, social worker etc. are being involved in so many social events and fans are also so much appreciate them for there social work, but most of them are doing for
clearing their bad images to bolster my view on of the famous Indian celebrity Salman Khan he is involved in so many unlawful acts and at the same time he has done so
many human welfare programs and help so many people by giving charity, but he is doing help for making his personality as he is a very magnanimous person. Therefore,
many of the people are doing for not their self-interest, but also to clear their bad images.
However, many people may claim that not all the people are work for building their image and they do only for helping poor people. This might be true for some cases
like in politics maybe there are so many politicians who genuinely wants people to help without caring about their image but the percentage of these people are very less and if one person is benefiting people for their interest yet thousand of individuals are doing only for their benefit. Furthermore, to strengthen the view in politics, the politician give free education, healthcare for poor etc. and get funds from the government and then they take that 95 % of the money for their benefit and 5% they invest
for educating the children.
In essence, the individuals are mostly helping others for their self-interest and even though if they help they have some own benefits to do so. Therefore, the majority of the
people are interested to do all beneficial actions for their self-enhancement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ldest centuries to the present era, the humans tendency is that 'No pain No Gai...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...No pain No Gain'. The individual doesnt interested to do the work for the other...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e filled with a plethora of benefits. Primarily, the fundamental reason to sup...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'majorities'?
Suggestion: majorities
...support my point of view is there are a majority of well-known charity organizations the...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fund
...s of social work and collect too much fund from the government, social platforms, ...
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Suggestion: Though
... work for the human welfares and even though they help the poor people, not for the ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rogress, not for the individual help. Secondly, As mentioned in the claim no a...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s in various fields like celebrities, , politicians, social worker etc. are bei...
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Suggestion: Many
...s and at the same time he has done so many human welfare programs and help so many...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., but also to clear their bad images. However, many people may claim that not ...
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Suggestion: Like
...le. This might be true for some cases like in politics maybe there are so many pol...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...enefiting people for their interest yet thousand of individuals are doing only for their...
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Suggestion: For
... for their benefit and 5% they invest for educating the children. In essenc...
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Suggestion:
... invest for educating the children. In essence, the individuals are mostly h...
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Suggestion: People
...do so. Therefore, the majority of the people are interested to do all beneficial act...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2513.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 519.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84200385356 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7730044521 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58460959304 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450867052023 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 774.9 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.747015869 60.3974514979 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 167.533333333 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 5.21951772744 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.97078651685 322% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341598771862 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148614918355 0.0831039109588 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640789560171 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143241325487 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749735370737 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 14.1392134831 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.