Claim: We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from those whose views contradict our own.
Reason: Disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Opposing ideas and contradiction is the key for the individual to excel in any field: as the opposing ideas help the other party to rectify their errors. The prompt suggests that learning is better with the people with whom our views reconcile. I mostly agree with the given statement for the following reasons.
People with contradictory views have different ways of learning, understanding, and interpreting things. For an instance, when the apple fell on the head of Sir Isaac Newton, he did not see it as the object falling on the ground: rather, he saw it as the invisible force that is pulling the apple to the ground and the same force that is preventing the earth from collapsing in the sun. On the other hand, had there been a no different way of looking at things we would not be able to explore the mysteries of the universe and still live a prosaic life. For innovation to occur and people to find some groundbreaking we have to surpass the orthodox views. And, become an iconoclast sometimes.
The contradictory ideas are developed when people are finding it necessary if the existing visions do not exceed the expectations. The contradictory ideas are developed by correcting the fallacies that had previously existed, making the new ideas infallible. For an instance, previously people thought the earth was flat and had believed it to be so; however, the theories from ancient Greek and many more later in the line provided the evidence that the earth was actually round. So, the wrong in the belief that we had acknowledged at first was corrected then and at present, the new scientific equipment has helped provide concrete evidence.
Some might argue that we can learn from the people with whom our views reconcile. As they have been through the tides that we have been through. They have a better understanding of our situation and know when we need the push to excel. For an instance, if a student is suffering from dyslexia, then it would be better to hire a teacher, who understands the problem better and can help the student to excel. However, the only orthodox concept of teaching such students may not work as an individual student may need a different way of guidance.
In conclusion, some might argue that sharing similar ideas will help people to learn better, but they should also acknowledge the findings of people with contradictory views. As they have an innovative and better way of learning, understanding, and interpreting things than the orthodox ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e people with whom our views reconcile. As they have been through the tides that w...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...similar ideas will help people to learn better, but they should also acknowledge the f...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rpreting things than the orthodox ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, still, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2073.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 424.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8891509434 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7725649116 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481132075472 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 629.1 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3171185386 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.105263158 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3157894737 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184180781709 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617922721134 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810640333325 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101013529775 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439991332375 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.