College and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester styding in a foreign country.
The prompt describes the importance of a part of whole academic study at abroad instead of only studying in self-country of the higher secondary, undergraduate and graduate students. Every country has its own academic curriculum and required books regarding this curriculum. Some countries may design books considering the demand and scope of its own capability. This may not sufficient to make oneself perfect and suitable to meet the demand of the nation. Knowledge on variety types of study systems may broadened the ideas of the student to become competent. So, I mostly agree with the mentioned topic.
Exchange of views, ideas, creativity, humanity through the education exchange program among the different countries of the world may help to develop one nation to improve their status and thus to reduce the inequality compared to the developed nation. For, example the main motto of the United Nations is to reduce poverty, gender inequality, and hunger by providing funds and improve socio economic status by making on self-reliant providing scholarship, international training etc. Organization of international events creates scope for the relevant personnel to share their opinion to improve the process that is related to the human benefit for the own country as well as for the world because one coild have a developed facility and other may have creative mind and another may have some findings and the final accumulation of all these may lead to an extraordinary outcomes. Students of one country having knowledge if gets opportunity to work at a rich environment of another country where they could experiment their ideas may make both the countries benefited.
Culture carries the information how enrich, developed and qualified a nation is. For, example consider a well-educated country where rate of women literacy is remarkable and they are self-sufficient. Contrary, consider a country where the rate of women literacy is very poor. Now, consider the case stated in an international newspaper that the women of the less educated countries harassed both physically and mentally because they are always dependent on the men and after their passed away they becomes the victim of the bad peoples of the society. This happens so due to their lack of education for which they cannot be self-dependent and they even not aware about their rights. If a student from the less educated country travel to higher educated and well cultured country where the women are respected and equal rights like man, they then after returning their own country may influence the women of their country to raise their demand regarding women rights and as an educated mother, sister, grandmother etc. to contribute their best to improve the socio-economic status of the country.
Possibility of learning bad attitude, behavior and habit through bad company. A student in his country may be disciplined, regular and well behaved and while staying at abroad he may come in close accompany with the diverted person and due to lack of judgment between good and bad because of his age and insufficient experience he may lose track of morality and fall in the world of darkness and this could lead to a devastating situation for both the countries and as well as the world. But there no much evident that the students who goes to abroad are spoiled.
The theme of the topic was to spend at least one semester of the academic learners at abroad to expand their views and imagination. There may have possibility of derailed of a novice during their buildup period but risk versace gain tells that the probability and the records of achievement through cooperation and exchange is more realistic, sustainable, effective and vital for the development of ones lacking and establishment of the equality all over the world.
- College and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester styding in a foreign country 66
- Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significants numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed 66
- Students should always question what they are taught instead of accepting it passively 66
- Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestioningly carry out the will of the people whom they serve 66
- Nation should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed 66
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'outcome'?
Suggestion: outcome
... all these may lead to an extraordinary outcomes. Students of one country having knowled...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...he men and after their passed away they becomes the victim of the bad peoples of the so...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ies and as well as the world. But there no much evident that the students who goes...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, as to, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3200.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15297906602 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82713231512 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486312399356 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1024.2 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.1723868 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2272727273 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216341195898 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648213025845 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688479873344 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124753885187 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426831857008 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 872, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'outcome'?
Suggestion: outcome
... all these may lead to an extraordinary outcomes. Students of one country having knowled...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 499, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'become'
Suggestion: become
...he men and after their passed away they becomes the victim of the bad peoples of the so...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 499, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ies and as well as the world. But there no much evident that the students who goes...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, second, so, then, thus, well, while, as for, as to, at least, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3200.0 2235.4752809 143% => OK
No of words: 621.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15297906602 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.991980728 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82713231512 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 302.0 215.323595506 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486312399356 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 1024.2 704.065955056 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.1723868 60.3974514979 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.454545455 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2272727273 23.4991977007 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.40909090909 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216341195898 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648213025845 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688479873344 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124753885187 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426831857008 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 163.0 100.480337079 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.