Education plays a vital role in ones student foundation and career. Unlike school education, a college education makes us focus on one specialized course. The author prompt recommends that students should be encouraged to pursue courses that interest them rather than the subjects that seem most likely to lead to jobs. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the authors suggestion with the following examples.
First of all, the job market is shifting, in one's decade, one field has high job opportunities the same field may have a recession in another decade. One cannot solely depend on the current trend of the market. For instance, In the 1980s Nuclear energy has rapid growth due to the advancement in nuclear weapons. Consequently, the nuclear engineering branch has high paying jobs. there are a lot of job opportunities with full demand at that time. But, in the 2000s with the development of computer and technology computer engineering has more demand. So, one should choose a course whether it has demanded or not, the student shouldn't depend on the courses which college provides.
Admittedly, let's take an example of the current scenario of engineering students in India. Around 1.3 million students appear for JEE exams which stands for Joint Entrance Exam for getting in engineering colleges. Now after taking admissions, the students do not know how to be prepared for industry-ready. After the course of 4 years, only 13% of that engineering student was suitable for the job. The rest of them were unemployed or switch there business. So the main reason for all this problem is that students are not opting for subjects according to their own choice rather they prefer the advice of another person only. To improve this problem many counseling fairs or awareness programs should be planned by Higher Secondary Schools to provide subjects according to there area of interests.
Furthermore, it will be imprudent to say that students will succeed by only studying the subjects where jobs are available. For example, entrepreneurs like Bill Gates and Steve Jobs can be termed as visionary. They studied Computer science which enables them, rather looking for the job, to create many 100s of jobs for the upcoming students. They studied within their area of interest and went ahead against the flow in that era where construction and oil industries were more prevalent than IT. Also, the invention of electric cars by Tesla.Inc CEO Elon Musk increases its distribution to a larger extent in America as well as Europe making Norway the first country to attain 80 percent of Electric cars on its streets. Therefore, studying within the students' interests can help the sector to make more opportunities for upcoming college graduates.
In conclusion, the students should be decided by themself whether which course to be selected considering the current market trend and taking into account recession.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, look, may, second, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2454.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16631578947 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71144164412 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 215.323595506 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 704.065955056 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8881558439 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.16 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261892955137 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070902438635 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100972877824 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160845797408 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911824328581 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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