Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
In any educational institution the quality of learning for students is primarily shaped by its teachers. The teacher tries to draw from his repertoire of knowledge and domain experience to impart quality education to its students. I strongly agree with the prompt as it suggests that these teachers should get out of their Ivory towers to witness , learn and adapt through their experiences in the real world which would then help them get a good handle on the current state of their subject of expertise . I will explore two reasons for my position in this essay.
Firstly , it would help the governments to surmount the scourge of unemployment. Unemployment rates have soared for states around the globe , not because of a dearth of jobs but primarily due to the subpar crop of students that are produced by their institutions each and every year. These fresh graduates and post graduates, mainly because of lack of skills and knowledge, are unable to seize the huge surplus of opportunities that they are presented with. Therefore, If the recommendation in prompt is implemented , faculty members can get conversent with the pressing needs of their germane industries which would enable them to plug the talent gap through periodic tweaks in their course content as per the industry demands as well as distribution of valuable insights to students in order to ensure their preparedness for jobs. In India ,the industry experts often moan about the lack of quality coming out of universities and blame the teaching staff for either teaching outdated curriculum or things of little significance in the practical world. This collaboration between colleges and industries would ensure a healthy supply of talent which can not only ease in but excel in these jobs.
Secondly, necessitating the teaching staff to explore their professional domain will quite clearly provide filip to research. This would be an obvious departure from the traditional route where in research was
contingent on government funds. Instead, this novel approach would entail a close collaboration between grant makers and faculty to bring about quality research in the direction that can efficiently dispatch problems . For instance , a professor in neurology on discovering the pressing need to work on substance abuse during his time at a mental hospital would certainly go on to pursue research work in substance abuse. The alignment of corporate and academic interest would make sure that research avenues are tailored to solve real world problems for mankind improving on both the qualitative and quantitative aspects of exploration. Conversely, the present system of non-aligned research goals between the professional and academic sides leads to poor funding as well as inefficient use of funds; The difference between development of a drug to treat side effects of an urgent issue of substance abuse to one which deals with issues that don’t have such primacy cannot be overstated.
All in all , it must be said that If this recommendation is paid heed then this would prove to be very advantageous for countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2618.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 498.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25702811245 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72397222731 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89597179859 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 280.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562248995984 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.4179111257 60.3974514979 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.0 118.986275619 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2941176471 23.4991977007 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23529411765 5.21951772744 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108364613668 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296277903093 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292050674232 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518651499951 0.150359130593 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236143018502 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 14.1392134831 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.38706741573 111% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 100.480337079 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.