Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The statement claims that colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. Although there are benefits when the students study abroad, forcing students to study in a foreign country is neither the best way for students to enhance their abilities nor providing the best environment for students to concentrate on what the students want to do.
Studying abroad does help students by stretching their experience and learning subtly different specific majors that was not taught in one’s own university. It is impossible for a single university to contain all kinds of teaching methods and experience, it would be even essential if the students want more information. One of my colleagues spent one semester at Munch university in Germany. By taking courses from there, she found that the German mechanics is focused on slightly different thing compare to Korean mechanics. Also, during the vacation, she traveled throughout Europe which was her first experience traveling so many places for such a long time. She sometimes misses that moment.
However, spending one’s time in foreign country means less time spent in one’s university, so the student need to spend more time for the sake of one’s speciality. To get a degree from the university, the one should follow a certain curriculum that the university guided. There are different curriculums on each universities and studying abroad won’t match with one’s own university’s curriculum. The friend of mine which I mentioned previously should be graduating this year, but she could not graduated yet because she did not fulfill her graduate credits. Not only her, many students who decided to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country expect that one’s graduation year will prolong at least a year, maybe longer.
Also, when we study abroad, we should not only take the lecture that would not exactly match with one’s major but also be adapted to the culture of the foreign which is not the best environment to study. The purpose of colleges and universities is to educate students and one of their duty is to provide efficient and comfortable environments for students to study. If they forces students to go abroad, each students should give extra efforts to get used to the nation’s food, weather, habitants and this will be trespassing the students’ right - focusing on learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 496, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'graduate'
Suggestion: graduate
...graduating this year, but she could not graduated yet because she did not fulfill her gra...
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Line 7, column 375, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'force'
Suggestion: force
...ronments for students to study. If they forces students to go abroad, each students sh...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 394.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21573604061 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76061526388 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515228426396 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5462593816 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4375 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346985266562 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122913772339 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957261461877 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232180696121 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684404597269 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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