The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The council of maple country is concerned about country becoming overdeveloped. So, the council decided to restrict the housing. This policy has been already implemented in chestnut county and pine county. Both had a different effect on the housing prices. So, the councile pridicts that there could be a a significant increase in the housing prices. Although! the argument appears clear, it is obsecure and equivocal with several loop holes which left the argument in an ambiguous state.
Firstly, the author considers the situations which took long back. That is, in chestnut county the policy was implemented ten years ago where as in pine county the policy was implemented 15 years ago. This two considerations aren't resonable. Argument would have been more defendable if the author have considered a recent situation because in this fast growing society today is different from tommorow and circumstances changes every day. So, it would have been more effective if the consideration were of recent times.
However, let us assume the situation where there is no change in society or circumstances from years. Still the comparision is not reasonable because the housing price may increase or decrease that totally depends upon the geography of the place. May be the pine county and chesty county are top different from maple county in terms of geography. So, the author must have provided information comparing the geographical situation of the all the three county. Which would significantly help to strenghten the argument.
Finally, there maybe chance that the housing price's may rise significantly. But providing information about geographical location of county and comparing the situation with a recent times issue would have made the argument more defendable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 58.6224719101 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 279.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39784946237 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85867854275 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541218637993 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5828787179 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154976631575 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510714918333 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726220576809 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0977999456268 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066476397933 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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