Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option
Artist is a person who express his thoughts and ideas to the world in a unique artistic way. There is no limit for ideas and thoughts of a person. Either that person can be artist or a common man. Personally, I think that there should not be any limit. I can say this promptly because of following reasons.
A writer is also an artist of word. In the past many people tried to change community with their pen and pencil. Century person like India’s father of nation Mahatma Gandi, expressed their views through books and newspaper. Unsuccessful attempt from government from that time was made to stop their words but it was unsuccessful attempt. He succussed, because of him India got freedom.
We can see evaluation of film industry which changed world of film industry. Initially people from India were refrained from watching films due to their primitive thoughts. If the government had interfered in the choices of film makers and people, then it was nearly impossible to achieve the success we are having.
Last but not least, I think that if space and is given to creative people they can create masterpieces. Subjects like transgender is hardly spoken by us that’s why people hate them. Government never interfered in such topics. Artist from Laksmi Bomb film have given a new perspective to people.
After analysing above points I think that there should be some limits of topics like violence, abusive things. Many criminals consider themselves as artist. According to me there should be limit for such things.
Finally, we can say that government limit is good point but limit in everything might cause unhappiness in people and that is why government should not limit.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 158, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...riminals consider themselves as artist. According to me there should be limit for such things. ...
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Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'limited'?
Suggestion: limited
...artist. According to me there should be limit for such things. Finally, we can say ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, then, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 285.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57901658816 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3958597241 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.9523809524 118.986275619 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 23.4991977007 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.28571428571 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223729167637 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639579217841 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349518061694 0.0758088955206 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106590027741 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378924130007 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 100.480337079 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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