“Critical judgement of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field.”
The speaker in the statement asserts that judgement in any field in not valuable unless from the experts of that field. I totally agree with this statement. In this progressive and sophisticated world where we live, each field is expends so a person never be able to get specialist in all of it breanchs. Therefore, getting help from an expert of that field will be useful. The reasons to substiatiated my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
The chief reasons why I think so is that it will take too much time, money and resources if we want to experience all of the talks. For example, Iran has rank four in world in roadway mortality. In my master thesis we want to study is causality. Studying highway safety isn’t a field of study in my country. Therefore, I have little knowledge and person who I can get help. All of the people that I face judges my modeling, my design and the way that I look to the problem. At first, I really feel frustrated and want to give up, but my advisor said that they talk just by their feeling but you have to work in a scientific way that there is no place for judging g by feeling. As I just account on my self and on my advisor suggestions. I could progress and could finish my master project. As you can see how un expert suggestions cause you lost the right way that you took and cause the waste of money and time.
Second, people always thinks in a ideal way. They always believe that they must have to see everything in perfect. I remember a statement that I read in a book even I don’t remember the exact story but its overall meaning is that I never will forget. I was written about a fledgling artist. After a hard working he organized a gallery for showing his painting. Since he believe himself, he put one of his best works and text that if you could find any mistake, please mark it. After the gallery he sees his best painting was destroyed due to lots of marks on it. He feel frustrating. But one of his friends says that put one of you works that is full of mistakes and put a white convas behind it, text if you find a mistake please drow in a right way in the white convas. in night if that night he saw, no one could find a mistake and since they couldn’t do it, they start to crowned his work. After I read this short story, I understand that people will gace lots of thing to say, but if you could put themselves in your own place they never can handle the problems like you. As you can see we never let the normal people to judge ourselves.
In sum, Taking aforementioned reasons and examples into account, We have to account on judgements of the expertices not on regular people because it will frustrating us from progress and will waste time, and money. Therefore, I totally agree with the speaker of the statement about people judgements.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... and resources if we want to experience all of the talks. For example, Iran has rank four ...
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Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...nowledge and person who I can get help. All of the people that I face judges my modeling, ...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a scientific way" with adverb for "scientific"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t by their feeling but you have to work in a scientific way that there is no place for judging g by...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a ideal way" with adverb for "ideal"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d time. Second, people always thinks in a ideal way. They always believe that they must hav...
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Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ime. Second, people always thinks in a ideal way. They always believe that the...
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Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'forget'.
Suggestion: will never forget
...story but its overall meaning is that I never will forget. I was written about a fledgling artist...
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Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'believes'.
Suggestion: believes
...lery for showing his painting. Since he believe himself, he put one of his best works a...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...could find any mistake, please mark it. After the gallery he sees his best painting w...
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Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...estroyed due to lots of marks on it. He feel frustrating. But one of his friends say...
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Line 5, column 742, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... text if you find a mistake please drow in a right way in the white convas. in night if that n...
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Line 5, column 778, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...row in a right way in the white convas. in night if that night he saw, no one coul...
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Line 5, column 971, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of things'.
Suggestion: lots of things
...ory, I understand that people will gace lots of thing to say, but if you could put themselves...
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Line 5, column 1088, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...never can handle the problems like you. As you can see we never let the normal peo...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'frustrate'
Suggestion: frustrate
...s not on regular people because it will frustrating us from progress and will waste time, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 92.0 33.0505617978 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2309.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 525.0 442.535393258 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.3980952381 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.78673985869 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49964278627 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474285714286 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 709.2 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.4817539223 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6206896552 118.986275619 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1034482759 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.51724137931 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14995979877 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405000679674 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787896146751 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101037489402 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859399447898 0.0667264976115 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 14.1392134831 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 48.8420337079 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 12.1743820225 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.38706741573 83% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.