The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations or reading.
In today's world, desire and necessity of people are increasing day-by-day. However, the rising of
greed is not limited to a single individual or a small group of people. It is prevailing to all the small
and big organization whose primary motive is only to make more profit either ethically or unethically.
Organization's desire for more profit, thereby more money, affected the society at large on various
factors such as health problem, Safety issues, increase in corruption. Therefore, I agree with the
above assertion that focussing more on profit aspect will develop conflicts with the general welfare
of the society and nation at large.
One such horrific scenario was the finding of pesticides in the soft drinks by famous brand Pepsi. In
order to make people addicted to their soft drink brand, the company allows the use of pesticides
and did not concern about the various health problems that the customers will encounter after the
intake the soft drink. Such consumption by the customer often leads to fatal cases and death of the
consumer.
Another such scenario is generally been seen in the construction projects where the safety of
people at large is neglected just to make more profit. The construction group uses low-quality
material and follow less standard practices in order to construct buildings, highway. Due to the use
of such low-quality material, these constructions collapsed even in low Richter scale earthquakes,
leading to many casualties and deaths. Along with the human loss, the collapse also degrades the
current infrastructure and nation's image across the world.
The greediness of organization also gave rise to corruption at large. The higher management
people tries to bribe the government officials as well as people who are working for their competitor.
These tricks are been done in order to get big government project. This way corruption increases
day-by-day and damages the national economy, thereby leads to less growth rate of a nation.
Therefore, the desire for more money through more profit affects the society in various ways and
thereby, conflict with the general welfare of society at large.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.305039787798 0.240241500013 127% => OK
Verbs: 0.116710875332 0.157235817809 74% => OK
Adjectives: 0.122015915119 0.0880659088768 139% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0477453580902 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106100795756 0.0444667217837 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.122015915119 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0318302387268 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73559314579 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0371352785146 0.030933414821 120% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.100795755968 0.0997080785238 101% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0053050397878 0.0249443105267 21% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0079575596817 0.0148568991511 54% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2189.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 345.0 452.878318584 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.34492753623 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414492753623 0.366273622748 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.298550724638 0.280924506359 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.197101449275 0.200843997647 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.136231884058 0.132149295362 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73559314579 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56231884058 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 62.1913379665 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2941176471 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7610603214 59.4972553346 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.764705882 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2941176471 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.470588235294 0.674092028746 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.94800884956 465% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 17.0 5.21349557522 326% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 50.1491901108 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 2.62121212121 1.64882698954 159% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497413900468 0.391690518653 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121567534362 0.123202303941 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0746646734505 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.776278602332 0.547984918172 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.237881032767 0.149214159877 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21021485317 0.161403998019 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106581885184 0.0892212321368 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.117631245261 0.385218514788 31% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0697489136445 0.0692045440612 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196874315286 0.275328986314 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969615612457 0.0653680567796 148% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30420353982 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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