As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of
humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain
your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your
position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not
hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology, evolving at a great pace because of the various research and work done by human being, aims at making our life comfortable and easier to live. It allow us to be free form the tedious nature of various task, develop our critical thinking by having access to large pool of information, enhance life expectancy and connect us with the world.
In today’s world, where humans are living a fast pace life, use of technology allows them to get rid of their monotonous task in shorted duration and thereby allowing them to focus on other important things. One such example is the use of online payment mechanism which allows them to pay their daily household bills such as electricity bills, house tax and many more, electronically and saves their precious time from the long standing queues. Modern transportation can be cited as another scenario where humans save time while commuting. However, these uses also gave rise to various problems such as obesity, laziness. But at the same time, technology provides you access to online yoga classes, fitness machines which makes a person mentally and physically fit.
Technology, a result of the collaboration of the research work and its implementation by some of the genious minds, cultivates the mental aptitude of the human being. One can argue that the invention of new technologies only helps people who are directly involved in its development, but it also help those people who are the other end and using it, by enhancing their critical thinking power and arises inquisitive nature among them. One citation can be of a person, who works at a photo studio, where the person thinks about using new creative ideas to make images/video better and thereby explores new options to do this. Technology, at the same time helps in increasing person’s knowledge base by providing them with a pool of information available via internet, via different forums and by interacting with different peoples across various regions of world. The information available is then been processed to gain knowledge and serves a useful purpose for them. One such example can be of a student or a working professional, who uses the information to make new useful applications such as communicating messengers, which can serve many people and connect them to outside world.
Therefore, the use of technology and more inventions related to it allow us to have a better life, cultivates our critical thinking and increases our knowledge base and without all of these, we would be having a monotonous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'allows'?
Suggestion: allows
...life comfortable and easier to live. It allow us to be free form the tedious nature o...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...research work and its implementation by some of the genious minds, cultivates the mental ap...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...nvolved in its development, but it also help those people who are the other end and ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'in short', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244111349036 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.147751605996 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.124197002141 0.0880659088768 141% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0278372591006 0.0497285424764 56% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0556745182013 0.0444667217837 125% => OK
Prepositions: 0.109207708779 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0471092077088 0.0406280797675 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83130779939 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0321199143469 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0792291220557 0.0997080785238 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0128479657388 0.0249443105267 52% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0214132762313 0.0148568991511 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2550.0 2732.02544248 93% => OK
No of words: 420.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 6.07142857143 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.366666666667 0.366273622748 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269047619048 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.192857142857 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.128571428571 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83130779939 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540476190476 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 62.266607358 55.4138127331 112% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 23.380412469 128% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5441853594 59.4972553346 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.142857143 141.124799967 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0 23.380412469 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.785714285714 0.674092028746 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 56.9047619048 51.4728631049 111% => OK
Elegance: 1.73148148148 1.64882698954 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366960756708 0.391690518653 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.103950496867 0.123202303941 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0459809251859 0.077325440228 59% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.551542653741 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184657820351 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158905420132 0.161403998019 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572076220811 0.0892212321368 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.317178602874 0.385218514788 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0542910167379 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251407895854 0.275328986314 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386817644758 0.0653680567796 59% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.