Calvin Coolidge once said, " What is good for a business is what is good for America". This
clearly sums up that the desire of a corporation to maximize its profits is in the best interest of
any nation. The welfare of a nation is directly related to the happiness and betterment of its
citizens.
When a corporation makes profits, these profits are directly passed on to the employees in the
form of better incentives. This motivates them to work even harder which in turn generates more
and more profits. This hunger for profits of the business houses not only boosts a country's
economy but also improves the living standards of the people.
Though this profit making desire of a corporation is a win win for both the corporate as well as
the nation, there should be certain rules and regulations that bind these corporations to keep in
check the implication of their actions on the nature.
For example, suppose an industry in its production process produces certain harmful chemical
by-products. Instead of a proper treatment and disposal system for these harmful chemicals, the
industry dumps these chemicals directly to the nearby water-body. This may be beneficial for the
company's profits but very deleterious for the country.
Another case, where in the quest for more and more profits, a company adopts the practice of
child labor for cheaper man power, this maybe in the best interest of the company's balance
sheet, but a huge threat to the nation's future.
In yet another such case, an industry compromises with the quality of its machines and
equipment for cost cutting at the cost of the safety of its employees. This may result in attractive
profit numbers but is it in the best interest of the nation as a whole?
Undoubtedly, a nation's progress is largely dependent on the progress of its industries and
people, but at the same time there should be certain rules and regulations governing the
operations of these corporations, making sure that this desire for profits does not come in the
way of the nations growth at large.
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- "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your o 50
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... is what is good for America'. This clearly sums up that the desire of a cor...
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...e its profits is in the best interest of any nation. The welfare of a nation is d...
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...d to the happiness and betterment of its citizens. When a corporation makes pr...
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...rectly passed on to the employees in the form of better incentives. This motivate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03438395415 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70804716156 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498567335244 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2677800717 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.97078651685 483% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128909273139 0.243740707755 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485133645899 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362117458022 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0400670994156 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367445545428 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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