Discussions are done to enhance knowledge. I don't agree with the statement that discussion over the controversial topics with contrasting views people is futile as not a plethora of people change their minds when their core beliefs are challenged.
Firstly, discussions is an art which is not mastered by all. Especially when we discuss controversial issues like abortion, racism, human rights, we should be sensitive towards the views of others and should put across our point in a subtle way that it does not hurt anyone's beliefs. The discuson did with an intent to criticize or condemn others never turn out to be fruitful. For instance, when two different political parties discuss an issue on an international forum they should consider sentiments all the citizens of their nation and should not just focus on proving the other party members' beliefs wrong. Hence, discussion goals should be to come up with a fruitful result of sensitive issues.
Additionally, when we can't expect from the contrasting view people to change their beliefs so easily. We can definitely educate each other and come to common grounds.
For instance, many children are raised with the belief that killing others will take them to heaven, however, when such children are provided the right education they turn into philanthropists from misanthropists. So, we can definitely change other's points of view by educating them not by challenging them.
To recapitulate, not discussing sensitive topics with contrasting views people as they won't change their minds is not a viable point. On the contrary, we should discuss a sensitive issues in front of everyone in order to understand and get views of all types of people.
- Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society s problems 50
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 65
- Discussing controversial topics with those with contrasting views is not useful because very few people change their mind when questioned about their core beliefs 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Message: Consider replacing "in a subtle way" with adverb for "subtle"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 277.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16967509025 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83165996657 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563176895307 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4605287235 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.153846154 118.986275619 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363748024052 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142747229706 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164180330281 0.0758088955206 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251741479062 0.150359130593 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1610793174 0.0667264976115 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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