A debate is an argument where one expresses his opinions on a certain topic and champions the issue he expatiates. One can find debates happening everywhere in his/her milieu -- from office to politics. Sometimes the debates are based on controversial topics and it can be a healthy argument if the discussion is with the right person.
For instance, if we go back in time, we can see that controversial debates have lead to fruitful outcomes. If no one argued and protested that there should equal voting rights for women, it is plausible that the women would have never cast their vote until today. We also should note that those who were against the rights of women -- maybe not wholeheartedly but did budge to their opponents' opinion.
Furthermore, A person is surrounded by people of different race and religion. Controversial topics are omnipresent and it is not possible to not acknowledge it. It is limid that the discrimination against race has pellucidly reduced only because there were people who argued against the discrimination and there were people who were ready to change their opinions.
Another stellar example would be the parliament of a democratic country, each time a bill is drafted if the cons of the bill are not opposed by the opposition party just because the opposition party presumes that the ruling party would not change their mind--the democratic country would have been a completely different place to live in. It would be filled with malicious laws benefiting the ruling party.
In a nutshell, we need to accept that two people can have a contrasting opinion on controversial statement. A discussion with a person having contrasting views will always be beneficial--unless the person is a narcissist and elitist-- the discussion would always turn out to be healthy and most likely settle on a common base.
- Those who see their ideas through regardless of doubts or criticism others may express are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy 86
- The city of Winston has two large department stores Namen and Roscoe Namen is known for its high end designer fashions while Roscoe is known for more affordable fashion options Both Namen and Roscoe are each considering opening another store in the gr 60
- Green tea has long been hailed as an excellent source of antioxidants powerful anti aging and immune system boosting compounds Many people therefore believe that the more cups they consume each day the greater the benefits Green tea however contains 50
- All too often companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees such consultants would be unnecessary 83
- Undergraduate students majoring in Business or in the Sciences should not be required to take any courses in the Humanities since those courses won t benefit their future careers 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 305.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06885245902 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9617092558 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531147540984 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3117020165 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217711852523 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714533223234 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426174642754 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108846635696 0.150359130593 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299288548568 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.