Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take.
In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and
explain how these consequences shape your position.
Currently, in top universities, there are a wide variety of courses to choose from. The students seldom get confused while opting for a field of study. This can be seen by the number of students who drop out of their courses every year. The number of students who don't opt for jobs in their field of study or tend to switch careers is also really high. This could be due to the lack of pay in that particular field. Their growth rate is far worse compared to those students who picked that field of study earlier.
The lower educational systems such as the high schools and the pre-universities must play a major role in encouraging the students to pick their field of study. The institution must expose the students to the corporate atmosphere by conducting seminars, hackathons, and industrial visits.
These kinds of events will help the students in narrowing down their options. There should be a platform where the students can easily contact their seniors and enquire about different courses.
While this kind of arrangement would certainly benefit those students willing to opt for mainstream subjects, it would hamper the confidence of those students who are looking at different fields. There could be many students who are targeting jobs that are not lucrative at the foresight. The institution must understand this diversity.
Therefore the institution must not make it mandatory for every student to pick a certain field but it should definitely encourage the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... every year. The number of students who dont opt for jobs in their field of study or...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...tution must understand this diversity. Therefore the institution must not make it mandat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, so, therefore, while, kind of, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71699240391 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 215.323595506 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 704.065955056 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5053600083 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230827942621 0.243740707755 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851108204001 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465807641468 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135579098674 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349849003823 0.0667264976115 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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