Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position
It have been discovered that choice of academic field of study determines the career path of students post-graduation. As such, this policy of encouraging students to choose fields that will prepare them for lucrative careers is a commendable recommendation. It is in the best interest of students to pick courses associated with lucrative careers mainly because of the benefits of financial stability on in the future. In this response I would be analyzing my view of this policy and giving reasons for my stance in support thereof.
Firstly, given the current economic state of the world, lucrative career paths are the most assured way to ensure financial stability on the long run. Therefore, urging students to choose courses associated with this fields poses as investments into their future which is certain to yield positive returns. The current market fluctuations in Nigeria constantly increases that awareness that the economic state of the nation is unpredictable. As a result, students are encouraged to think prudently in selecting course on students in University level. This as resulted in a shift from commonly preferred medical course to tech oriented course like data analysis, web development.
Secondly, encouraging students to take courses associated with lucrative fields provides an avenue for them to acquire required foundational skills and knowledge to function effectively in those career paths. A students to takes data courses on programming with python, java; analysis with Microsoft excel, power Bi, SQL etc. has a head-start in that career field. This provides an advantage over people that switch over to these web design or data analysis fields after post-graduation. As such this policy would be a means by which students that start building their competences for these lucrative fields.
Although this is arguably important to encourage students to choose fields of study that are associated with their passions and interest, mostly
because it would assure them of job satisfaction and happiness in the future. A painter who is urged to consider a career in relative lucrative fields like accounting or business development would have little to no satisfaction with the job in spite of the financial benefits. However, studies have found that over time such individual come to derive a sense of satisfaction when they are able to carve a niche for themselves in these fields.
In conclusion, this policy to encourage students to choose fields associcated with lucrative career paths is quite plausible.It provides a means for student to invest into a financially stable future in spite of the uncertainties in the global economy; and it gives the foundational prerequisites to function effectively in these career field. Moreover they are assured on deriving a sense of satisfaction on the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 448.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36830357143 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98660297218 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470982142857 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 762.3 704.065955056 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5397380596 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.578947368 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5789473684 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.21951772744 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279796586687 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979138234145 0.0831039109588 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849480294509 0.0758088955206 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164289707773 0.150359130593 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694417253462 0.0667264976115 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.1392134831 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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