The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.
The freedom to express is one's right. The emergence of social media and blogosphere has provided people an opportunity to express their opinions on the current social issue occurring in their environment. Social media is a great medium to share views on specifics or in general.
Expressing something on blogging websites or social media doesn't always have to be true, sometimes people just spread aspersion about things which they envy or criticize someone because of some deep seated ill-will. For Instance during the election political parties contending each other always find ways to belittle the other and spread it like a fire over the social media.
Furthermore, there are certain blogs where one gain good insights over a specific topic. People tends to share their opinions and find others like them. There are certain blogs which are specifically made to help people in distress, on these blogs people can share their feelings being anonymous and get help without being known, its like online mental therapy
Moreover, there are times when it might seem like these blogging sites and social media websites do decline the standards for covering news and political topics, sometimes people so share half of the information that would cause conflicts among people currently viewing that blog or social media as there is no restriction for anyone to write a blog or express on social media. "A little knowledge is a dangerous thing", people should always do a background check before running towards each other with armories in their hands. Many such incidents in the past might have not occurred if people did their background checks on the material they were reading.
At last i would like to conclude that the claim is ambiguous and can have different views with respect to the situation at hand. And tough it is the right of every individual to express their view one should be have complete knowledge if he/she is going to write it on a worldwide platform.
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- The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, in general, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07012195122 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4809337651 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551829268293 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 137.055240282 60.3974514979 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.583333333 118.986275619 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147089790389 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512364303274 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564668041634 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830284572274 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066431631755 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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