Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The prompt claims that every individual in a society must follow just laws and disobey and resisit unjust laws. I disagree with the statement
for the reasons described in this essay.
The claim is based on the assumption that everyone in a society is of the same opinion about the laws. In other words, everyone knows what is right and
wrong. But in reality, every individual person has his own perception about the rightneousness of a particular law. If he decides to obey laws which
he thinks are right and disobey otherwise, then we can easily imagine how much chaos it will produce. For example, if in a society the laws is such that
a person should not consume alchol. Now, some people will follow it while some will chose not to. Some people might think that banning alcholo is against their
freedom and they will raise protest against the law. It will lead to waste of time and resources on the society's part then to pacify the protestors. This is one
example but we can fairly see any other law will have the same story. Therefore, the society will be ineffective as there would no be mutual agreement among it's people
about the rules and ethical codes of the society. There will always be some protest going on.
In contrast to the statement, when people are adhering to the laws and rules laid down by the society, it not only allows the society to function smoothly but it
gives the society an opportunity to punish someone who doesn't so that others are not put into difficulty from the miscreant. It's easy to pluck one bad apple
from a group and save the group from degarding. Similary, a society can maintain peace and prosperity by taking proper action against the miscreats. Further, if there
happens to be law which is "unjust", then instead of bluntly rejecting the authority and protesting against it on the streets, people can approach the authority
and present their case with proper reasoning. The leaders can then make right amendments which are more appropriate.
Now, Someone might argue, what if the society makes cruel rules which shouldn't be followed by anyone. If this is the case then people can choose to protest
against the authority. Either they can change it's leader or make the current leader change the law.
In sum, individuals should by loyal to the rules and regulations of the society. A society can function properly only if everyone adheres to the rules
which can happen only when people feels a sense of responsibility towards the society. Only in exceptional cases where the laws are made in
a dictatorial fashion and which are unjust, the society can resist the authority.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, in contrast, in contrast to, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2211.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 456.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84868421053 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5283470985 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.5078358281 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208965596899 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621368046738 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602854911869 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074166232318 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732754265322 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.