The first step to self-Knowledge is to reject the familiar
The one eager to learn and grasp new things tends to acquire self-knowledge. One who rejects the familiar environment and comes out of their comfort zone has the ability to to gain deep knowledge which comes only by self realization. The prompt suggest that the first step towards self-knowledge is to reject the familiar environment and accept the new things in life. In my opinion, i strongly agree with the author due to two following reasons.
Firstly, the tendency to prohibit things which are familiar will allow an individual to discover new things and accept new aspects in life which might be hard to imbibe for others. Success is achieved not only by hard work but also by getting out of his comfort zone and accept the aspects of life which is rejected by the common. For example, Scientist couldn't invent new concepts and phenomenons if they wouldn't have thought something out of the blue. The confidence, power and mental strength allows a person to think out of the box which may sound rare to others but that's where inventions take place and the whole world accepts the invention gradually. The above example illustrates that a development in themselves can lead to a big change in the entire world.
Additionally, it's not just about a development in oneself but also to have an adaptive attitude to sustain all kind of environment in the society. For example, a person living in a pastoral area where life is easy and smooth but in order to pursue his carrier and dreams he shifts to a busy city where life is fast and where a person is always out of time. In those scenario's a person who has an ability to accept what comes in his life and drive through those time is the one who has achieved material success. The above example prompts that a change and ability to accept is one of the major attribute which determines our self-knowledge.
Obviously, there will be some who argue's that learning in familiar environment is comfortable and a lucid job but the area of learning is very limited. However, in order to learn more one has to reject and contradict the familiar beliefs. One who thrives to learn more has ultimately gained knowledge to the highest level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
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Suggestion: couldn't
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Suggestion: wouldn't
...nt new concepts and phenomenons if they wouldnt have thought something out of the blue....
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Suggestion: that's
... box which may sound rare to others but thats where inventions take place and the who...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, as to, for example, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 382.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73821989529 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63682095678 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492146596859 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6184610122 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211276163246 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786745034739 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13122715222 0.0758088955206 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147828067548 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151921529553 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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