The following appeared in a memorandum from the manager of WWAC radio station.
"To reverse a decline in listener numbers, our owners have decided that WWAC must change from its current rock-music format. The decline has occurred despite population growth in our listening area, but that growth has resulted mainly from people moving here after their retirement. We must make listeners of these new residents. We could switch to a music format tailored to their tastes, but a continuing decline in local sales of recorded music suggests limited interest in music. Instead we should change to a news and talk format, a form of radio that is increasingly popular in our area."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The manager of the WWAC radio station suggests a memorandum that they will change its form from rock-music to a news and talk format in order to increase the number of listeners to the radio station. The manager provided some evidence to support their suggestion. however, such evidence are very weak with a lack of numeric statistics. if the plan gave based on such evidence, it will hardly lead to intended results.
First, the manager gave evidence that the number of retired people has significantly increased in this area, which is the major proportion of listeners on the radio. hence, the music format should change to their preference. however, the manager give no specific statistics about the tastes of the retired people. it is possible that such retired people love rock music. Furthermore, the manager also did not give any data related to the qualification of their rock format that whether people like it or not. if the retired people in this are love rock but the quality of rock program on the radio dod nit satisfied them, the memorandum of the manager will no approach to the intended results.
Second, the manager suggests a change to a news and talk shows formats. but he failed to show a numeric statistic related to the proportion of listeners in the area like to such programs. it is possible that the major part of their audiors do not like to listen news or talk all of the day, and like to listen a story, novel. it is possible that the most citizens follows news and talk shows quequently, but they love to do it on the televison, but not the radio. hence, the manager should provide more realiable numeric before coming to the final recommendation.
Third, there are many reasons which lead to the decline of numbers of listeners. The format of the station is not the sole factor. it is possible that there is another station in this area which provides an interesting program in rock music and attracts numerous listeners to their station. it is possible that the quality of connection to the station was weaken by the long time in installation, which lead to the low quality of sound.
In conclusion, the manager should not generate a memorandum based on such unrealistic and weak evidence. Other detailed statistics should be carried out to verify such evidence before the plan was implemented.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, so, third, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 58.6224719101 106% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83830845771 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60944325084 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412935323383 0.4932671777 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 614.7 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.99550561798 220% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2418185936 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.619047619 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95238095238 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213182370617 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646277551405 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723027633009 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1160725188 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650288212413 0.0667264976115 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.