“Formal education tends to restrain our minds and spirits rather than set them free.”
Formal education is what everyone pursues in their life. In such education, everything is predefined and time to time as per the needs changes are made on the basis of new researches and developments. It can be said that formal education is something which standardized as per various fields and universally accepted.
To illustrate formal education let’s consider a general example in the field of medical science. On primary level to begin as a medical scholar one must have bachelor’s degree, and if someone wants to do specialization in the particular field he/she should pursue masters. Furthermore, to attain much more knowledge and to contribute something to the field from the gist of your learning one can apply for Ph.D. programs which give a platform for expressing his/her thought freely. Since it can be seen that a reach that free stage one has to go through long procedure this is how formal education work. Everything is predefined in stages.
Now digging more into the topic it can be seen that to do something extraordinary like a free spirit or to do something that is out of the box one don’t have to follow the standardized education rather one can mold it in his own way. And these curves while molding will reflect how effective you are, and how different you are from others. To further elucidate this point let us take an example.
Potter has the same mold to make various pots. But with the same mold he can create a number of different pots. Just by making some changes in it. Similarly, everyone has the same path that is the same type of education system but how well you carve it and how effective your modification you can make in it will make you different. That is there is no need to be free from formal education rather work on it only. And show your distinct potential in it.
Another example from the past can be taken which actually made a huge impact on formal education nowadays. Our numerous scientist, physicists like Newton, Einstein, Stephen hawking etc. all were regular scholars at respective universities and followed the formal education. But their further work in their field made them different not even this their work made modification in the study. None of them were some free from the formal education they just think freely.
Therefore, it can be concluded that formal education doesn’t’ tend to restrain somebodies minds it’s all up to you. How deep and freely you think and implement over your thought. Moreover, formal education is a path through which one can find its destiny.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 492, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... for expressing his/her thought freely. Since it can be seen that a reach that free s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'moreover', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218181818182 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.163636363636 0.157235817809 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0909090909091 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0444444444444 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0707070707071 0.0444667217837 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.10101010101 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0282828282828 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.77194262843 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0323232323232 0.030933414821 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0767676767677 0.0997080785238 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282828282828 0.0249443105267 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.030303030303 0.0148568991511 204% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2572.0 2732.02544248 94% => OK
No of words: 437.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.88558352403 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.320366132723 0.366273622748 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256292906178 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183066361556 0.200843997647 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.144164759725 0.132149295362 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77194262843 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 219.290929204 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503432494279 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 56.8474867786 55.4138127331 103% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.48 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5720225491 59.4972553346 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.88 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.48 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.44 0.674092028746 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 43.1092906178 51.4728631049 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.24637681159 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258000290205 0.391690518653 66% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0666099189009 0.123202303941 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785264824146 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.46108517412 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15374640844 0.149214159877 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855005999365 0.161403998019 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071209588048 0.0892212321368 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.295359803668 0.385218514788 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103234750678 0.0692045440612 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169778463869 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702151074703 0.0653680567796 107% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 10.0 2.70907079646 369% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.